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A living thing I was; I graced your land- three hundred years and more, I stood with pride. A focal point to meet with friends to stand, or drive through intersecting roads beside the wall that sheltered me, your age-old tree- assumed long-standing for eternity. The 'Heart of Balmville' often you called me; so many grew up in my view's embrace, and took for granted that my vision be forever etched within this Balmville space. Inside your small historic park, I stood preserved for years in my dear ancient wood. My statuesque magnificence, now gone- your hearts are saddened, missing my great limbs. But with my stump, may memories hold on- while image of my leaves and branches dims. May 'Heart of Balmville' live within your heart- I, Balmville Tree, at last from you depart. August 22, 2015 Premiere Contest: No 1183 Sponsor: Brian Strand Note: "The Balmville Tree was Methuselah among trees, a gnarled and furrowed Cottonwood that has lived four times as long as its kind was meant to live. George Washington rode past it on the way to his Newburgh, New York headquarters..." NY Times, 09/20/2015

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Date: 9/5/2015 12:30:00 PM
Sandra, Congrats on your win... LUV ~SKAT~
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Date: 9/5/2015 10:20:00 AM
Well expressed emotions Sandra! Congrats on big win!
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Date: 9/4/2015 8:45:00 PM
A touching and emotive write, Sandra! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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Date: 9/4/2015 5:00:00 PM
I remember reading this first time round Sandra and I was very surprised it didn't place in the original contest - so pleased to see it showcased again:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 8/31/2015 9:53:00 AM
So similar our stories, Sandra. And writing on a true to life tree meant even more, I would believe. It was nice to see the photograph too....yet so heartbreaking it is! Odd that we have both lived where such a tragedy of trees made our towns mourn the loss. Beautiful poem indeed.
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Date: 8/23/2015 2:36:00 PM
Sandra, such a beautiful personification, so much emotion in your words 7 and thanks for visiting my personification poem
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Sandra Haight
Date: 8/24/2015 8:00:00 PM
Hi Broken, thank your for your positive comments and support. I really appreciate it! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 8/23/2015 7:52:00 AM
Love your story trees are so beautiful then to see one go is heartbreaking a 7 and good luck in the contest. Hugs Eve
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Date: 8/24/2015 8:02:00 PM
Yes, it was heartbreaking, Eve. This Cottonwood was dated back to 1699, and became an historical site that people came to visit. So sad it became a safety issue with falling limbs, etc. Thank you for your supportive comments. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 8/22/2015 10:50:00 PM
ahhh, another mighty poem of a mighty awesome tree! I just read Broken Wing's and I thought both of you did an amazing job describing trees that are no longer standing!
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Date: 8/24/2015 8:04:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea. I appreciate your support so much. Sandra
Date: 8/22/2015 5:35:00 PM
I remember reading this one before Sandra and being saddened it is no longer standing in its full glory - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xxxx 7
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Date: 8/22/2015 5:47:00 PM
Thanks, Jan. I did revise and rewrite as a Personification, so it does read a little differently. Yes, the Town is still trying to decide what to do in its memory, since this spot was declared a State Park (smallest in USA!!), in 1996. Hugs, Sandra

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