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The Heart-Beat of Me

In the calling of days, when life whispers low and I can feel words falling- like a touch of poetry; the tender echo . . that is you - a melody so true, one that forever stays - I know, it is the heart-beat of me that holds you here- ever so sweetly ------------------ ~ love should have one heart-beat ~ * a little scribble *

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Date: 1/10/2024 8:45:00 PM
Heartbeats echoing with the melody of love, Wonderful write Brandy, Blessings
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 1/11/2024 6:36:00 PM
So beautiful, when hearts beat at the sane time. A breathtaking melody, indeed. Thank you Joseph, for your lovely comment. :) Hugs, Brandy
Date: 7/9/2018 5:44:00 PM
B.. I've written an echo to your captivating write and I seek your permission to post it at some point in the future...
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 7/9/2018 8:53:00 PM
I am sure it will be amazing, as you write from the depth of your heart as well. My heart is blushing and smiling, all at the same time.
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Date: 7/9/2018 7:02:00 PM
I very happy with the short write.. I put my entire soul into it. I think it will be beautiful and reflect positively on your artistry as a poet.
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 7/9/2018 6:55:00 PM
I don't know what to say, as I am almost speechless. I would love to read your echo. Leaves me breathless that you have asked me. Thank you.
Date: 7/9/2018 4:38:00 PM
Another beautiful scribble, Brandy, the two hearts should eclipse and become one, with one heartbeat. I always look forward to reading your short little gems my friend. John
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 7/9/2018 6:43:00 PM
Thank you John. Yes, love should have one heartbeat. Your kind words are appreciated. ~ Brandy
Date: 7/9/2018 12:18:00 PM
I echo your sentiments
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 7/9/2018 1:18:00 PM
Thank you Tim. So very kind of you. I appreciate your thoughts. ~ Brandy
Date: 7/9/2018 11:32:00 AM
wow, brandy; amazing in its languid wordscape!...huggs
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 7/9/2018 1:15:00 PM
Hi nette, thank you for your lovely comment. And for the hugs as well. :) Brandy
Date: 7/9/2018 9:21:00 AM
Simply beautiful...
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 7/9/2018 1:14:00 PM
Thank you. I appreciate your kind words. ~ Brandy
Date: 7/9/2018 8:43:00 AM
B.. This echo is held in wonder by your heartbeat and all the life and love that flow from that sacred, magical place!
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 7/9/2018 1:14:00 PM
:) It's sweet you calling me B. My heart is blushing and fluttering, all at the same time. Magical moments indeed. Thank you for your wonderful thoughts. ~ Brandy
Date: 7/8/2018 7:45:00 PM
Lovely...the best goes on...still moving strong...Nice write ... All the best Brandy
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 7/8/2018 8:31:00 PM
Thank you Arturo. When words curl around me, moments seem to touch the heart. I appreciate your lovely comment. ~ Brandy

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