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The Haunting Transience of Reality

petals temporary beauty that perishes in advance of fall, end began foretold

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Ink Empress

Date: 10/17/2023 5:28:00 AM

This is so deep and so beautiful, i love how you’ve written this cinquain in such a creative manner which delivers so much in few syllables. Petals and their temporary beauty that perishes, as fall approaches, so much depth in that! I love it, thank you for writing. Congratulations on winning

Di11y Da11y
Date: 10/17/2023 10:43:00 AM

Thank you Ink, I appreciate the placement and the kind words

Sand Blown

Date: 10/13/2023 4:43:00 PM

...very nice.....trans-eye-ence.....the study of seeing through...time......stan

Di11y Da11y
Date: 10/14/2023 2:10:00 AM

Your comment inspired my next poem Stan :)

Di11y Da11y
Date: 10/13/2023 10:45:00 PM

I like that Stan - thank you :)

Paige Hind

Date: 10/11/2023 4:12:00 PM

Beautiful take on Fall. :)

Di11y Da11y
Date: 10/11/2023 11:01:00 PM

Thank you Paige x

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 10/11/2023 2:45:00 PM

short but powerful poem! I loved it. What is that saying...an ending is another beginning and vice versa? I especially like temporary beauty perishes...true of flowers and even we humans. With our end foretold, we too wither then perish. Rambling, sorry. Have to fav this one, Sara

Di11y Da11y
Date: 10/11/2023 2:49:00 PM

Aww thank you Sara! I did a lot of work on the family tree last year and those birth date and end dates get to you after a while - the beauty in the middle you have to be there for - which is totally about appreciating the day we have x thank you for the fav x