The Haunted Manor

The old manor had red stone bricks covered in climbing vines,
and columns and facades in dazzling swirls;
it was classical architecture with intricate lines,
a treasure in the middle of no where, I pondered touching my pearls;
I knocked on the door, so scared my straight hair curls.

It slowly opens, creaking on rusty hinges-  and I step inside,
seeing grand chandeliers of leaded glass crystal lights;
sparkling and shimmering, they had been on, right? I lied,
portraits watched me as I walked around looking at the sights;
for sure those portraits were of the long dead-  hello, I loudly cried.

Was this place vacant, maybe even haunted, this I could not ignore, 
gone to waste and ruin, with no one living here any more; 
for leaves had blown in under the ornate front door.

I had seen a sign "Rooms For Rent" nailed to a tree,
just before my car had crashed into a ditch;
driving through the rain had been a big mistake I now see,
but, I needed shelter for day had turned to pitch;
dark and as I walked the road I hoped they had tea.

Now, I stood dripping wet in this room from the past, 
hello, I whispered  and jumped when a male voice spoke;
from behind me-   the man was old with eyes vast;
we have been waiting he said, let me show you to a room, his voice a choke,
it was a horrible night of weeping and creaking and I could not last.

I run down the road from that house-   forevermore, forevermore   . . .

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January 6, 2019


Poetry/Rhyme/The Manor House
Copyright Protected, ID 19-1101-590-02
All Rights Reserved.  Written under Pseudonym.


Written for the contest, 'One Night In a Haunted Manor'
sponsor, Tania Kitchin

Fifth Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Roper Avatar
January 23, 2019 at 7:29 PM
Nicely done, Dear Heart, you have created great imagery and feeling on your well written poem. . Congratulations on your win . Hugs Eve ~`*
La France Avatar
January 24, 2019 at 3:17 PM
Eve, thanks for the comment and the congratulations ~
Devonshire Avatar
January 23, 2019 at 7:22 PM
Very suspenseful and your clever rhyme adds to the tale's flare, Dear Heart. Enjoyed! Congratulations on your win in Tania's contest. Hugs, Carolyn
La France Avatar
January 24, 2019 at 3:18 PM
Carolyn, thanks for visiting and the great comment ~
Kitchin Avatar
January 23, 2019 at 6:00 PM
I enjoyed your spooky, bone chilling tale, congratulations on your winning placement!
La France Avatar
January 24, 2019 at 3:18 PM
Tania, thanks for the contest and my great placement ~
Kiser Avatar
January 8, 2019 at 6:50 AM
Eerie and should do well in the contest. Best of luck.
La France Avatar
January 8, 2019 at 8:45 PM
ML, thanks for visiting and for the comment, appreciate ~
Blown Avatar
January 7, 2019 at 7:20 AM
straight out of e.a. poe....dark tales from the past
La France Avatar
January 8, 2019 at 8:46 PM
Sand, thanks for the visit and comment, appreciate ~
Stebbings Avatar
January 7, 2019 at 7:02 AM
I liked the vivid scene setting here, could be opening for a film. Good luck in the contest. Barry
La France Avatar
January 8, 2019 at 8:46 PM
Barry, thanks for the comment and visit ~
Godwin Avatar
January 6, 2019 at 5:16 PM
Applause! Creative and talented story telling that raised suspense-bumps on my arms and quickened my heart beat. You do 'creepy and scary' very well! All the best ... CayCay
La France Avatar
January 8, 2019 at 8:47 PM
CayCay, thank you for the visit and that great comment ~
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