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The Haunted House

The Haunted House So vacuous this winding road A rainy eve for man, not fit As shivers course my dampened skin My vehicle, this place does quit When through the pines these eyes do spy A silhouette of monstrous feel Of glass and mortar, scattered seed My Lord, a house, can this be real It stood alone, o’ shadowed crawls Deserted docks of scattered stain Rotted wood beneath my feet Rusted hinges scream in pain A single flame, the candle fire A rapid dance upon the breeze Found, the stairway lined with blood Ascending high above the trees A sudden noise, the walls they breathe Like someone dragged on landing bare A voice, a raspy spoken word A warning, oh my heart doth share Musty halls o’ ripped and tattered Faded coverings shed their dust A turning knob, an entry opened Enter if you truly must Death, the smell, it reeks this place Locked away of deeds long past Hidden, yet the prize I seek Felt of boney fingers cast A chill does travel down my spine I fumble for my trusty knife Protection from the figures dark I fear to lose my very life What place is this upon the moor Of crashing waves and battered stone A remnant of its former self And I now wander all alone The moon in clouded skies this night Hath broken free and shone its glow Creates a haunting atmosphere An urging of myself to go Yet still I feel the need to search Through cluttered shelves, my mind doth track To find perhaps a treasure lost Then wage my life to bring it back When there upon the mantle sits An urn of golden grand design Brazen as a captured wish This now, a treasure shall be mine Upon its face, of hand inscribed A warning in poetic verse Four simple lines to now beware This poem fields a wicked curse "All ye whom enter of this place Of sacrifice and love lost pain Dare not these ashes to remove For thee shall never leave again" So quick of feet I make my haste In scramble to the painted door Then, slam; before my eyes it shuts A whisper, “Ye shall leave no more.” Apparitions, ghostly shapes Now flood into the sitting room Some faces I seem to recall Fate hath brought them to their doom My hands before my face they fade These eyes they can no longer see I float unto the heavens high Oh Lord what hath become of me It stood alone, o’ shadowed crawls Deserted docks of scattered stains As this shall be my resting place For I shall never leave again 08/28/18 For the Haunted House (Scare me or make me laugh) Poetry Contest Sponsored by Dear Heart

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Date: 9/16/2018 7:48:00 PM
I'm a little late , but great story, Chris, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve~`*
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Chris Green
Date: 9/17/2018 10:55:00 AM
Thank so very much my friend. I appreciate all of the kindness you show me.
Date: 9/5/2018 10:47:00 AM
Chris congratulations on your win in my contest with this incredible write. You are a talented poet that is clear. Well done !
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Chris Green
Date: 9/5/2018 11:23:00 AM
Thank you so very much. It was pleasure to enter your wonderful contest and my honor to have placed so high. Thank you again my friend.
Date: 9/1/2018 2:53:00 PM
It was a thrill to read your wonderful entry Chris. Lines like "Rusted hinges scream in pain" make this the outstanding first place winner it is. Congratulations on your deserving top win! : )
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Chris Green
Date: 9/3/2018 8:11:00 AM
Thank you Connie for all of your kindness to me. You always make me smile.
Date: 9/1/2018 12:57:00 PM
Great story, Chris. I enjoyed this spooky one...Congrats on your win!
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Chris Green
Date: 9/3/2018 8:11:00 AM
Thanks so very much Charles, I am thrilled you enjoyed this one
Date: 9/1/2018 12:29:00 PM
Wow! You make us feel the house’s every pain, every horrible noise and the panic of one trapped! Great storytelling! Congrats, Chris!
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Chris Green
Date: 9/3/2018 8:10:00 AM
Thanks Kim, coming from a talented poetess like you, this comment is a high compliment to me.
Date: 9/1/2018 11:30:00 AM
Awesome write! Congrats on your win.
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Chris Green
Date: 9/3/2018 8:09:00 AM
Thanks so much Dale.
Date: 8/31/2018 10:52:00 PM
G'day Chris ... excellent my friend. Well written and kept me enthralled throughout. Not too many poems of suspence top yours - thanks Chris - Lindsay
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Chris Green
Date: 9/3/2018 8:09:00 AM
Thank you so very much Lindsay for your kind thoughts about my poem. I appreciate you my friend.
Date: 8/30/2018 5:43:00 PM
An excellent suspenseful narration, Chris. We are lucky you 'lived' to tell the tale! Regards // paul
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Chris Green
Date: 8/31/2018 8:30:00 AM
Well...I could be a ghost you know. : ) Thanks so much Paul.
Date: 8/29/2018 2:17:00 PM
Woah!! This has such a compelling storyline and atmosphere, Chris! The hinges screaming in pain is fantastic! ( I wonder if you meant to put ‘ MY’ mind doth track?
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Chris Green
Date: 8/29/2018 2:21:00 PM
Indeed I did and thank you so much for catching that. I can't even begin to tell you how many times I read this and that slipped past me. I appreciate your help and your kind words. Thank you again Wendy
Date: 8/28/2018 6:35:00 PM
your poem reminded me of Poe, and I hope you consider that a compliment.
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Chris Green
Date: 8/29/2018 9:39:00 AM
I definitely consider that a compliment. Thank you so much Agnes. I am happy you enjoyed this.
Date: 8/28/2018 6:32:00 PM
Excellent scary poem, good luck in the contest!
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Chris Green
Date: 8/29/2018 9:38:00 AM
Thanks you so much Tania
Date: 8/28/2018 6:30:00 PM
Save this one for Hallowe'en. You can really paint a picture!
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Chris Green
Date: 8/29/2018 9:38:00 AM
Thanks so very much my friend.
Date: 8/28/2018 5:37:00 PM
LIke me, you had the visitor become a forever resident of that haunted place! Very well done, Chris. This does not seem to be your usual style (as I recall). It reminds me of Poe!
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Chris Green
Date: 8/29/2018 9:38:00 AM
Thank you so very much Andrea. The Poe reference is a huge compliment to me, he is a fave of mine.
Date: 8/28/2018 3:08:00 PM
This is really great. Kudos and good luck in the contest.
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Chris Green
Date: 8/28/2018 3:29:00 PM
Thanks so much Jesse. I am thrilled you liked it.
Date: 8/28/2018 2:34:00 PM
chrissss!...been a while!...ohh, you covered a lot of ground with this magnificent, suspenseful write!...i see this way up the winning list!...touche and huggs
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Chris Green
Date: 8/28/2018 3:29:00 PM
Hi Nette, it has been a while. Thanks so much for stopping by to read and especially for your wonderful comment.
Date: 8/28/2018 1:50:00 PM
all i can say is one word, chris - WOW!!! you have outdone yourself here - brilliantly written and scary indeed! i can't see how anyone can top this for the contest...
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Chris Green
Date: 8/28/2018 3:28:00 PM
Thank you so very much Ilene. Coming from you this is a huge compliment. I appreciate your kindness

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