The Haunted House

The Haunted House
  
So vacuous this winding road
A rainy eve for man, not fit
As shivers course my dampened skin
My vehicle, this place does quit

When through the pines these eyes do spy
A silhouette of monstrous feel 
Of glass and mortar, scattered seed
My Lord, a house, can this be real

It stood alone, o’ shadowed crawls
Deserted docks of scattered stain
Rotted wood beneath my feet
Rusted hinges scream in pain

A single flame, the candle fire
A rapid dance upon the breeze
Found, the stairway lined with blood
Ascending high above the trees

A sudden noise, the walls they breathe
Like someone dragged on landing bare
A voice, a raspy spoken word
A warning, oh my heart doth share

Musty halls o’ ripped and tattered
Faded coverings shed their dust
A turning knob, an entry opened
Enter if you truly must

Death, the smell, it reeks this place
Locked away of deeds long past
Hidden, yet the prize I seek
Felt of boney fingers cast

A chill does travel down my spine
I fumble for my trusty knife
Protection from the figures dark
I fear to lose my very life

What place is this upon the moor
Of crashing waves and battered stone
A remnant of its former self
And I now wander all alone

The moon in clouded skies this night
Hath broken free and shone its glow
Creates a haunting atmosphere
An urging of myself to go

Yet still I feel the need to search
Through cluttered shelves, my mind doth track
To find perhaps a treasure lost
Then wage my life to bring it back

When there upon the mantle sits
An urn of golden grand design
Brazen as a captured wish
This now, a treasure shall be mine

Upon its face, of hand inscribed
A warning in poetic verse
Four simple lines to now beware
This poem fields a wicked curse

"All ye whom enter of this place
Of sacrifice and love lost pain
Dare not these ashes to remove
For thee shall never leave again"

So quick of feet I make my haste
In scramble to the painted door
Then, slam; before my eyes it shuts
A whisper, “Ye shall leave no more.” 

Apparitions, ghostly shapes 
Now flood into the sitting room
Some faces I seem to recall
Fate hath brought them to their doom

My hands before my face they fade
These eyes they can no longer see
I float unto the heavens high
Oh Lord what hath become of me

It stood alone, o’ shadowed crawls
Deserted docks of scattered stains
As this shall be my resting place
For I shall never leave again

08/28/18

For the Haunted House (Scare me or make me laugh) Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Dear Heart

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 9/16/2018 7:48:00 PM
I'm a little late , but great story, Chris, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve~`*
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Chris Green
Date: 9/17/2018 10:55:00 AM
Thank so very much my friend. I appreciate all of the kindness you show me.
Date: 9/5/2018 10:47:00 AM
Chris congratulations on your win in my contest with this incredible write. You are a talented poet that is clear. Well done !
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Chris Green
Date: 9/5/2018 11:23:00 AM
Thank you so very much. It was pleasure to enter your wonderful contest and my honor to have placed so high. Thank you again my friend.
Date: 9/1/2018 2:53:00 PM
It was a thrill to read your wonderful entry Chris. Lines like "Rusted hinges scream in pain" make this the outstanding first place winner it is. Congratulations on your deserving top win! : )
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Chris Green
Date: 9/3/2018 8:11:00 AM
Thank you Connie for all of your kindness to me. You always make me smile.
Date: 9/1/2018 12:57:00 PM
Great story, Chris. I enjoyed this spooky one...Congrats on your win!
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Chris Green
Date: 9/3/2018 8:11:00 AM
Thanks so very much Charles, I am thrilled you enjoyed this one
Date: 9/1/2018 12:29:00 PM
Wow! You make us feel the house’s every pain, every horrible noise and the panic of one trapped! Great storytelling! Congrats, Chris!
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Chris Green
Date: 9/3/2018 8:10:00 AM
Thanks Kim, coming from a talented poetess like you, this comment is a high compliment to me.
Date: 9/1/2018 11:30:00 AM
Awesome write! Congrats on your win.
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Chris Green
Date: 9/3/2018 8:09:00 AM
Thanks so much Dale.
Date: 8/31/2018 10:52:00 PM
G'day Chris ... excellent my friend. Well written and kept me enthralled throughout. Not too many poems of suspence top yours - thanks Chris - Lindsay
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Chris Green
Date: 9/3/2018 8:09:00 AM
Thank you so very much Lindsay for your kind thoughts about my poem. I appreciate you my friend.
Date: 8/30/2018 5:43:00 PM
An excellent suspenseful narration, Chris. We are lucky you 'lived' to tell the tale! Regards // paul
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Chris Green
Date: 8/31/2018 8:30:00 AM
Well...I could be a ghost you know. : ) Thanks so much Paul.
Date: 8/29/2018 2:17:00 PM
Woah!! This has such a compelling storyline and atmosphere, Chris! The hinges screaming in pain is fantastic! ( I wonder if you meant to put ‘ MY’ mind doth track?
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Chris Green
Date: 8/29/2018 2:21:00 PM
Indeed I did and thank you so much for catching that. I can't even begin to tell you how many times I read this and that slipped past me. I appreciate your help and your kind words. Thank you again Wendy
Date: 8/28/2018 6:35:00 PM
your poem reminded me of Poe, and I hope you consider that a compliment.
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Chris Green
Date: 8/29/2018 9:39:00 AM
I definitely consider that a compliment. Thank you so much Agnes. I am happy you enjoyed this.
Date: 8/28/2018 6:32:00 PM
Excellent scary poem, good luck in the contest!
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Chris Green
Date: 8/29/2018 9:38:00 AM
Thanks you so much Tania
Date: 8/28/2018 6:30:00 PM
Save this one for Hallowe'en. You can really paint a picture!
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Chris Green
Date: 8/29/2018 9:38:00 AM
Thanks so very much my friend.
Date: 8/28/2018 5:37:00 PM
LIke me, you had the visitor become a forever resident of that haunted place! Very well done, Chris. This does not seem to be your usual style (as I recall). It reminds me of Poe!
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Date: 8/29/2018 9:38:00 AM
Thank you so very much Andrea. The Poe reference is a huge compliment to me, he is a fave of mine.
Date: 8/28/2018 3:08:00 PM
This is really great. Kudos and good luck in the contest.
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Chris Green
Date: 8/28/2018 3:29:00 PM
Thanks so much Jesse. I am thrilled you liked it.
Date: 8/28/2018 2:34:00 PM
chrissss!...been a while!...ohh, you covered a lot of ground with this magnificent, suspenseful write!...i see this way up the winning list!...touche and huggs
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Chris Green
Date: 8/28/2018 3:29:00 PM
Hi Nette, it has been a while. Thanks so much for stopping by to read and especially for your wonderful comment.
Date: 8/28/2018 1:50:00 PM
all i can say is one word, chris - WOW!!! you have outdone yourself here - brilliantly written and scary indeed! i can't see how anyone can top this for the contest...
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Chris Green
Date: 8/28/2018 3:28:00 PM
Thank you so very much Ilene. Coming from you this is a huge compliment. I appreciate your kindness
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