The Haunted House

THE HAUNTED HOUSE
While on a tour across the Scottish highland moor one summer noon I stopped by a Victorian house. Curious, I entered through the half-closed door, a dark room filled with antiques I could browse. In the eerie air before I could call out loud, “anybody in” the creaking wooden door closed sharply behind me. In the alarmed mind I pressed the panic button within, for with all the doors closed the way out I couldn’t see. I shivered with the creepy feeling of being trapped, saw a shadowy figure appear in the murky hallway, as if striding in air into the sinister room he stepped. Saw his scalded fiery face before he turned it away. Scared I wailed, “I’m sorry I entered”, as he came near, “please help, open the door for me, out I should go”. He looked at me, a single word I didn’t hear him utter. He walked silently to the door in a floating stride slow. How he opened so softly the heavy door I couldn’t see, I rushed out in a breath to the open in flood of sunlight. Before I could turn back quickly the door closed on me, I couldn’t say “thank you”, the man was out of sight. In nearby village I queried about the man and the house, I’m told if anyone lived in the haunted house they’d know. In the outhouse fire that took them a long time to dowse the lone caretaker was burnt to death some two years ago.
August 22, 2018 Contest : The Haunted House Spnsored by : Dear Heart
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Roper Avatar
September 16, 2018 at 8:12 PM
I'm a little late, Subimal, great imagery and story. Big congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve~`*
La France Avatar
September 5, 2018 at 11:44 AM
Subimal, congratulations on your win in my contest with this great story, well done !
Sinha-Roy Avatar
September 7, 2018 at 4:05 AM
Thank you, Constance for the placement.
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 1, 2018 at 8:03 PM
Sounds like a true tale Subimal. Chilling and suspenseful! Congratulations on your wonderful win! : )
Sinha-Roy Avatar
September 1, 2018 at 11:24 PM
Thank you, Connie.
Mitra Avatar
August 22, 2018 at 12:47 PM
what a powerful write. ..it was almost reading a chilling story
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August 23, 2018 at 2:19 AM
Thank you, Debjani for your visit and appreciating the poem.
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August 23, 2018 at 2:19 AM
Thank you, Debjani for your visit and appreciating the poem.
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