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The Haunted House

The big old wooden door creaks loudly as I tentatively push it ajar, my eyes strain to see inside but the darkness commands and I don't see far. I hear tiny feet scurrying quickly across the entrance halls floor, I glimpse something moving out of the corner of my eye as I strain to see some more. With another nervous,cautious step, deeper into the darkness I tread. As I do so, an icy cold gust of air howls straight through me and horrifying visions fill my head. With legs as heavy as wood and a cold sweat upon my brow, I put one foot in front of the other reaching out, I feel the bannister, I've made it to the staircase,somehow. As I make my way up the stairs with each step a wooden,creaking groan. With nothing but the spiders landing in my hair as I brush past the thick cobwebs, I feel terribly alone. Now stood on the landing and the dawns early light seeps through a window pane, I see a long corridor before me and I feel a blessed relief to be able to see again. Then I hear a noise, one I've heard before, a sad,high pitched whimpering. My footsteps suddenly quicken as the sound leads me to a door. With the sound ever increasing, as I walk through the door, I am leapt on by a hairy beast, with its heavy breathing and saliva dripping, it promptly pins me to the floor. After the beast finishes his ritual of nearly licking me to death , I grab the beast and squeeze him tight, relieved the search is over for my best pal,with his smelly dog breath. 13/8/18 Sponsor - Dear Heart

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Date: 7/30/2018 11:36:00 PM
never fall to fear....if you do, it can be severe....what if, through it all, you didnt recognize the bark....would you become playful on the floor or saddened by the dark....what of the few things that are inevitably certain....would you set them free or LET him from the curtain....whatever you say, i'm sure to Love your voice....and if you ever ask why, the answer is always the same, it's your choice.....superb write jenny....;)
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Jenny Brewer
Date: 7/30/2018 11:45:00 PM
Wow Eric, Thank you very much, I am blown away by your amazing comment, how wonderful to receive another rhyming comment. You are a star ?? x Jenny x
Date: 7/28/2018 7:10:00 PM
Such creepy imagery, you built up the suspense so brilliantly Jenny - I loved the twist at the end of the poem:-) hugs jan xx
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Jenny Brewer
Date: 7/29/2018 6:59:00 AM
Hiya hun x Oh good, I am glad it came across like that. I hope you are still having a great time with your own poetry. Still can't get over how wonderfully you have done xx You should blow your trumpet as loud as you can..xx

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