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The Happiest Day of October

The happiest day of October was the one when she wore her little red hat Off to the woods we went hand in hand like songbirds in flight; The sun in all its glory spilled its applesauce grin all over my baby and I as we caught a fistful of leaves in our hands, and made them fly. . . Diving right in we buried our arms in a pile of leaflets oh what a thrill! We sunk below the fire brick colors of russet yellow and brown, and inhaled the mulched flavors of earth for all their worth ; It was the most momentous day of my life, my little girl was five and I just had to memorize her smile. Her, a colorful piece of art an Autumn portrait, me, a weary soldier about to be deployed; The first thing she did when I returned was hand me a crumpled leaf then said, "I saved it for you daddy " As I knelt at her side I buried my face in a sea of red curls it was then that I knew, I was finally home. Sept 7 2022 # 1 Jumping In A Pile Of Leaves Sponsor Regina McIntosh Contest Name Fall Flavors
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Magdalinos Avatar
December 20, 2022 at 4:39 AM
Hello Mystic Rose Rose,Merry Christmas and Happy New Year. Kindest Regards.
Mcintosh Avatar
October 25, 2022 at 4:08 AM
Congrats with this beautiful poem. God bless you sweet friend. Love, Gina
Rose  Avatar
October 25, 2022 at 4:41 AM
Thank you, Regina, I am honored, love xo
Agustin Avatar
October 24, 2022 at 11:14 PM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... making me vicariously feel how is it to jump over piles of leaves in my "Autumnless" country. God bless you.
Rose  Avatar
October 25, 2022 at 4:41 AM
Thanks Beata
Fowler Avatar
October 24, 2022 at 6:23 AM
Back with big congratulations on your win dear Vie! Linda
Rose  Avatar
October 25, 2022 at 4:41 AM
Thank you, dear Linda,
Magdalinos Avatar
September 10, 2022 at 4:38 AM
Hello, Dear Mystic Rose Rose, a wonderful poem, May your life always be full of joy,happiness and health,.God Bless you
Rose  Avatar
September 10, 2022 at 6:37 AM
Thank you dear Mulu from your kind visit. May you be blessed with inspiraton today, love < Peace
Baker Avatar
September 9, 2022 at 3:51 PM
Lovely. heart-warming poem, Vie. Thanks for reading it to me today. I enjoyed listening to your poem. I was deployed when my first child, a daughter, was just 3 months old. Getting cassette tapes with her giggling got my through my tour in Southeast Asia. It was a joy to see her smiling face at the airport when I returned. Thanks for sharing, my friend. Hugs, Bill
Rose  Avatar
September 10, 2022 at 3:38 AM
So glad to hear you experienced the joy of a daughter during that difficult time of your youth. I am sure that smile must have pried the sun of its warmth, lol, praying you are all blessed with good health, God is good :)
Tor Avatar
September 9, 2022 at 1:19 PM
Such a wonderful day you shared with your baby you so beautifully share this special moment in special words that resonate with Love Vie really enjoyed you reading the Poem and sensing the love you had in your heart in being with your baby on that Special day. God bless you and someday she will read and remember you and reflect on that Special day you and her shared...
Rose  Avatar
September 10, 2022 at 3:37 AM
Thank you Michael for making time for my poetry, have a blessed day
Fowler Avatar
September 9, 2022 at 10:10 AM
Oh so beautiful Vie.
Rose  Avatar
September 10, 2022 at 3:36 AM
Thanks dear Linda hope you enjoy fall this year
Leffanta Avatar
September 8, 2022 at 11:29 AM
Nice! My daughter welcoming me home is my fondest memory! Aloha!
Rose  Avatar
September 8, 2022 at 3:49 PM
I am sure it was how old was she Rico,, those special moments are engraved in our heart forever,:)
Buhagiar Avatar
September 8, 2022 at 8:23 AM
Excellent description of a love for her daughter.
Rose  Avatar
September 8, 2022 at 3:48 PM
No greater bond than the one for a daughter, from a father, thanks for reading Victor,
Kendrick Avatar
September 8, 2022 at 6:11 AM
Ahh!! I enjoyed reading this descriptive and emotive work. Thank you for sharing and stopping by my page. This one reads like a good contender for the contest to me. Way to go. Sara
Rose  Avatar
September 8, 2022 at 3:47 PM
Thank you dear Sara, so many sacrifices made for our Country, we should never take our soldiers for granted, , keep well
Ricci Avatar
September 8, 2022 at 5:20 AM
Good Morning Mystic Rose. This is beautiful in every way. The imagery the moment in time, all of it. And yes, the ending is priceless. This is a feel good entry for certain. Thank you for sharing your poetic talent with us. Have a wonderful morning and day. Take Care. (smile)
Rose  Avatar
September 8, 2022 at 3:46 PM
It is sad when they are separated from their loved ones, and I love happy endings, this one ended well. thanks for reading
Wolf Avatar
September 7, 2022 at 7:26 PM
'Her little red hat'... and the sun's 'applesauce grin' sure won me over, Mystic. Voila! Enjoy Autumn! :) gw
Rose  Avatar
September 8, 2022 at 4:01 AM
Thank you Gershon for reading my poem and commenting, Have a blessed day.
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