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The Halo of Her Heart

When you laid your hands upon my naked heart feeling the flex of it's fire, accessing the innocent desire, holding the form of a new need, I swear, that's when love did start, your touch became my tradition, the wine of your wisdom my lovely teacher, From the fine feathers of your soft steel wings I write poetry of storms in paradise and of love in your eyes, sympathizing with my sage solitude, yet subduing the sadness it brings you offer me everything an angel owns, halo and bloodroots, and together we rise - J.A.B.

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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores

Date: 12/12/2015 6:03:00 PM

A very romantic poem. Only a deep love can stir those feelings.

Justin Bordner
Date: 12/13/2015 12:29:00 AM

The roots of her love reach deep into my core Nayda...J.A.B.

Skat A

Date: 9/22/2015 7:31:00 PM

one word "BEAUTIFUL" ----Skat

Justin Bordner
Date: 9/22/2015 8:46:00 PM

I would like to add one more word Skat...Love...J.A.B.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 9/14/2015 6:12:00 AM

Simply Beautiful !!!! Let me go read another one...

Justin Bordner
Date: 9/14/2015 1:10:00 PM

Yes please Charma, imbibe yourself with the love...J.A.B.

Paul Callus

Date: 9/2/2015 11:36:00 AM

This is the ideal relationship, Justine...magnetic and fulfilling. Love those "soft steel wings", a phrase that says a lot. ~ All the best. // paul

Justin Bordner
Date: 9/3/2015 12:45:00 AM

Idealism is our realism, our love, our way, our truth. Thank you for appreciating this devotion between she and I Paul. J.A.B.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/30/2015 8:39:00 AM

Your writing is the distillation of desire!

Justin Bordner
Date: 8/30/2015 6:42:00 PM

Desire and trust create the knowledge of love...your poetic comment is xool Richard, thanks...J.A.B.

Afolabi Muideen

Date: 8/29/2015 10:09:00 AM

A seductive write Justin, you penned this with passion of love. the description of this wonderful write is eloquent,great and excellence and she is indeed a great; her angelic hands have filled a lot of people with bliss through you......... A 7! And a fav.. love...................A.M.

Justin Bordner
Date: 8/29/2015 9:56:00 PM

She and I seduce one another with eyes of love genius. Thank you Afolabi, for being sensitive to the awesome passion that she and I glow with...J.A.B.

Alexis Y.

Date: 8/28/2015 9:14:00 PM

Justin, I enjoyed reading this write. It so full of love,passion,admiration and appreciation. I could go on and on about this well written piece. Excellent job! I'm glad I stopped by to view this amazing poem.:-)Alexis 7

Justin Bordner
Date: 8/29/2015 9:50:00 PM

Your virtuous comment illuminates the four arteries of a true and living heart that strengthens the body of the divine love that she and I grow wild in Alexis...J.A.B.

Constance La France

Date: 8/28/2015 12:50:00 PM

Justin, this is a beautiful angel poem -gossamer , a 7 and thanks for visiting my hushed pen poem

Justin Bordner
Date: 8/28/2015 8:29:00 PM

Thank you Wings of Fire, angels and spiders have something in common, they are both very nimble and creative...J.A.B.

Kelly Deschler

Date: 8/26/2015 9:15:00 PM

This angel must have given you the gift of writing and the inspirational muse to continue with it... I enjoyed reading your tender poem, Justin. Beautifully penned!

Justin Bordner
Date: 8/27/2015 2:16:00 AM

My sweet and stunning angel has put the nectar of love on my quill, I endure for her...your spirited comment makes me feel so good and grateful tonight Kelly...J.A.B.

Kp Nunez

Date: 8/22/2015 9:33:00 AM

I'm back to just enjoy this again, and I have also read your thoughts in your replies to others. Kim

Justin Bordner
Date: 8/22/2015 9:53:00 PM

To enjoy love is to enjoy the heart, and your heart provides much to respect and savor Kim...my thoughts find nurture on your lips...J.A.B.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 8/16/2015 3:52:00 PM

I've missed your poetry, Justin. It is so beautiful and so full of sweet honesty. I wish you happiness....

Justin Bordner
Date: 8/16/2015 8:54:00 PM

I'm happy that your heart remembers the road to my passion...honesty is a sweet flavor of raw love Eileen...J.A.B.

Serenity Fox

Date: 8/15/2015 12:36:00 PM

Very beautiful poem <3

Justin Bordner
Date: 8/15/2015 7:59:00 PM

Passion is beautiful when lips pause on fresh warmth Serenity...J.A.B.

Duke Beaufort

Date: 8/5/2015 3:57:00 PM

Justin, this is very touching and a profound description of a relationship. I also like to read people's comments, and it seems you have had a very positive impact on poets in this space. I am extremely happy that you are able to do this and hope that you will continue your excellent work and influence. Sir, be well.

Justin Bordner
Date: 8/6/2015 2:12:00 AM

What she and I share is beyond a relationship, it feels as though we have created a new energy in the universe, our desire has given rise to a new star Duke...many of the best writers in the world call this space their home, this is where hearts burn divine; we are positive creation...J.A.B.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 8/5/2015 2:42:00 AM

Justin, the finesse in your words,, the increasing intensity of the effect of your phrases! I like much your first stanza.. =')! Stunning verse always!~Olive Eloisa

Justin Bordner
Date: 8/5/2015 2:19:00 PM

Her love is so smooth and searching, for her touch I'm always thirsting Olive...J.A.B.

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 8/3/2015 10:45:00 PM

I love when you are inspired like this, sweet poet! I can picture such a magnificent ascension, rising higher with every pump of the heart, every bolt strike of the soul's joyous awakening..Always, Laura

Justin Bordner
Date: 8/4/2015 2:53:00 AM

The ascenion of two souls into a realm of euphoric knowledge discovered in a tradition of innocent passion only possible for their wild hearts...I love the virtue of your poetic vision and truth Laura...J.A.B.

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 8/3/2015 10:43:00 PM

Breathtaking, dear Justin...the amount of love and gratefulness in this poem is inspirational, wondrous, and humbling. I love your line, "your touch became my tradition, the wine of your wisdom my lovely teacher" -the first stanza is very touching. I can tell your heart is engaged deeply in this piece as you provide such personal parts of you in it, highlighting the angelic presence of your love who provides sustainable strength for your growth and hers together.

Justin Bordner
Date: 8/4/2015 2:18:00 AM

Yes Laura yes...you understand how every part of my heart hums into a higher awareness of bliss, throbbing with the synergy of my Love's ageless passion and obsessive energy...she and I are engaged in a quest of immortal love, we are creatures of extreme design! J.A.B.

Constance La France

Date: 8/3/2015 1:48:00 PM

Justin, this is a deep and beautifully penned poem full of love

Justin Bordner
Date: 8/3/2015 8:51:00 PM

Yes, a deep love created this poem Wings of Fire...J.A.B.

Kp Nunez

Date: 8/2/2015 8:40:00 PM

You have a new post! I'm not sure but from those I've read, this is by far the shortest. Regardless, the brevity does not affect the intensity of the message. Loved the line "I write poetry of storms in paradise and of love in your eyes". It tells of the complex nature of the subject. I would like to delve longer on "soft steel wings" though. Will have to return to this later at a more relaxed moment, Justin. As with your other writes, a 7 and fav. hugs!

Justin Bordner
Date: 8/3/2015 2:11:00 AM

Yes Kim, my heart swelled, and my soul felt the lightning of love as I expressed the beauty, not of a subject, but of the only woman that has awoken my heart to the meaning of life. The heart need not speak long when love is true...please share your thoughts with me, while relaxed or impassioned Poetess...J.A.B.

Justin Bordner
Date: 8/3/2015 1:58:00 AM

I am glad that your keen poetic eye has addressed the paradoxical metaphor, "Soft steel wings..." my Love has the grace and resilience of a summer's breeze, and the strength of a tight fire in a winter's night... your visit of warm sentiment and profound analysis is a gift to me, thank you Kim...J.A.B.