Andrea Dietrich Poet Rhyme

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For Nette Onclaud's Through Aesthetica Poetry Contest/ July 21, 2026

The Gypsy Dance

In firelight, moved by percussive beat
along with a tambourine’s jingle-jangle,
a young girl swirls on tiny dancing feet.
Around her ankles twirl large bangles.
As she thrusts and twists her hips petite,
her clothing, with bright adornments, spangles.
Her face in moonlight is so joyous and sweet
as faster and faster she brings gypsy heat.

#12 on 100 Best New Poems List as of July 28, 2026

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David Crandall July 30, 2026 at 8:50 PM I can feel the excitement of the gypsy dance.

I Am Anaya July 25, 2026 at 9:59 PM Precious poetry, I love the dance, the tiny dancer, moonlight, fire so warm Andrea Congratulations on your win! :)

Kim Rodrigues July 25, 2026 at 4:52 AM I knew I would see your poem on top, Andrea! Congrats on first place!

Krishnanand Guptar July 25, 2026 at 12:42 AM Congratulations dear poetess on your top win in this contest with a superb poem on gypsy dance. It is a vabrant ode bringing alive gypsy culture. Wishing you a blessed weekend.

Valsa George July 24, 2026 at 9:42 PM Beautiful, vibrant dance. A lovely twirl of the girl in a dress of motley shade, typical of gypsy girls. Congratulations Andrea on your first place win.

Sotto Poet July 24, 2026 at 11:25 AM Heartfelt congratulations on your first-place win, great honor to share the trophy with you. Smile

Karen Jones July 24, 2026 at 8:58 AM Congratulations on another deserving win Andrea!

Paige Hind July 23, 2026 at 8:41 PM lovely

Joseph P. DiMino July 23, 2026 at 3:54 PM I love gypsy dancing. Very earthy and exciting. Very well written. Exciting!

Mike Bayles July 23, 2026 at 7:32 AM Andrea, you created a delightful experience.

Kim Rodrigues July 22, 2026 at 7:35 AM Love the photo you chose, Andrea! This is a winner in my book! A fave! Being half Hungarian, I enjoy gypsy poems. Love the contrasts and the beauty of your poem! Hugs

Sara Kendrick July 22, 2026 at 4:43 AM I like your description of the artwork, Andrea. The art is very beautiful as well. Thank you for sharing your creativeness with us. Way to go. Sara K.

Natasha L Scragg July 22, 2026 at 3:03 AM Beautiful. I love the way you bring the whole picture and joyous atmosphere together, the beat, the outfit, the dance, the time of day, the pace and the feel, you've encapsulated it all into just 8 lines.. :-D ...impressive xx a fantastic one for the contest xx

Alison A Smith July 22, 2026 at 1:31 AM Very well placed words, I felt like I was watching the dance happen.

Joanna Daniel July 21, 2026 at 11:38 PM Brilliant, love that pic too, Andrea:) Andrea Dietrich July 22, 2026 at 1:03 AM Thanks. I love that picture too