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The Guitar Player

Greasy hair under his baseball cap, day-old stubble on his double chin, he picks away on his Gibson guitar, eyes half shut easing the guilt of leaving his family behind. Miles of road ahead of him, rain hits the windows of the tour bus, he's seen them all----the farmlands, mountains, deserts, woodlands and skyscraper cities. Booze and smoke cloud his brain, he can't remember when he had a home-cooked meal last, he's played in all the honky-tonk dives from here to there where he still smiles at the pretty women who give him the eye cause they love his music and masculinity, he's the guitar player.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 3/2/2018 8:38:00 PM
That is an eyeful, Sonia. I have to chuckle because I wrote a poem a couple of days ago about wondering what a musician's life was like. I have the answer right here. Not that pretty! Thanks for sharing, Sonia. Congrats on your fine win.
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Sonia Walker
Date: 3/2/2018 9:17:00 PM
Line, what we think might be a glamorous life while on the road as an entertainer proves to be just the opposite, stale and full of cigarette smoke. Thank you do your uplifting comment. Have a great weekend. ~ Sonia
Date: 7/2/2016 12:51:00 PM
The Guitarist and lead singer of "The Band", Robbie Robertson once said that fame and musicianship is an impossible way of life and that "The road has taken a lot of the great ones". I see a lot of that haunting reality in your Prose. And all the beautiful women in the world can't make up for that empty, lonely feeling of missing home. Great Read/Great Write!
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Jesse Zerlaut
Date: 7/28/2016 8:19:00 PM
In response to your reply, I agree, comments and acceptance of our work makes or breaks a day. I posted in five contests, four of which my poem didn't make the cut. It can weigh on us, but you need to know your work is good, because it is exactly that.
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Sonia Walker
Date: 7/2/2016 1:32:00 PM
Jesse, wow, your review just made my day! One of my other poems just got rejected for a contest I recently entered. Our egos are certainly fragile when it comes to our writing. Thank you for reading my poem and your encouraging comment. ~ Sonia
Date: 4/9/2016 12:20:00 AM
Loved it! Thank you for sharing such a fine piece of art. I look forward to reading more.
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Sonia Walker
Date: 4/9/2016 12:56:00 AM
Mike, thanks for your uplifting review. Have a great Saturday. ~ Sonia
Date: 4/6/2016 2:31:00 PM
- Beautifully written, for someone who was close to your heart Sonia - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Sonia Walker
Date: 4/6/2016 2:50:00 PM
Anne Lise, thank you for sensitive comment. All the best, Sonia.
Date: 4/6/2016 2:10:00 PM
The first one of yours I've read and I love it. I look forward to reading them all!!..
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 4/6/2016 4:52:00 PM
Yes..it feels like almost the passing of an era. Waylon and Merle and now Willie's getting close..
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Sonia Walker
Date: 4/6/2016 2:23:00 PM
Larry, thanks for your enthusiastic review. There is some irony to the timing of entering this poem late last night onto 'PoetrySoup' since one of my favorite country-western singers passed away today----Merle Haggard. ~ Sonia

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