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The Groom To His Future Bride

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My daughter has just got engaged to an old school friend of hers I am so happy for her.

For my next contest I would like you to write the vows she might say in return to him. hugs

 

 

 

You are the goddess of my heart there is no star brighter than you. When the moon beams down in her glory her light reminds me of you swirling as your laughter spills out. The sun to me a pale reflection compared to you. Allow me my darling to take your hand in wedlock. Let me worship you for the rest of my days, hold and keep you safe. Mysterious lady who reminds me of the sea with her gentle ways that explode into storms come ride the waves with me. I pledge to you my all for without you there is no sun, no moon or stars. Just a world of dim shadows showing little more than shapes. Place your hand in mine and together we will conquer all in our paths, raise our children and live life.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 10/9/2017 9:44:00 PM
Wonderful words for a wonderful girl I'm sure, Shadow. And, thank you so much for choosing my poem for your daughter to say to the lucky groom. I'm honored and I pray God blesses them and your family.
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Date: 10/2/2017 12:48:00 AM
A very beautiful gift for your daughter and her fiancee Shadow. I will be excited to see the winning poem. Blessings to you and your family. Connie
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Date: 9/27/2017 5:36:00 PM
wow, I am finally seeing the poem we are to model OUR poems after or at least respond to. This is very well written, Shadow. I love the images and wish your daughter an amazing wedding day!!!
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Date: 9/16/2017 10:34:00 AM
Big congrats and Blessing for the Future-Couple
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Date: 9/6/2017 8:07:00 AM
Many congratulations to the couple, Shadow, this is a lovely romantic poem:)
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Date: 9/4/2017 4:22:00 PM
Oh how romantic and many congrats to the happy couple:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/1/2017 7:25:00 PM
well penned dear friend...especially d part place ur hand in mine and together we will conquer.... big kudos to you
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Date: 8/11/2017 6:49:00 AM
Beautiful, romantic dialogue well written--well done Shadow!
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Date: 8/11/2017 5:28:00 AM
Oh, the power of this incredible write is so uplifting and romantic I love it my friend! It's been awhile since you have posted a poem Shadow, its nice to read you again...this is a beautiful poem, I loved reading this wondrous piece this morning! Thank you for posting this illustrious poem! Congratulations to your daughter and future son in law! That is awesome news! Great Work!!
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