The Gristmill

A frigid landscape casts a bitter pall
over a barren nation of weary souls
imprisoned and laden under a regime
of hammer and sickle, numb and cold.

Regimented are the eyes of oppression  
unblinking, endlessly watching
scrutinizing, searching, ever searching
grinding down the will, receding hope.

The slow wheel of the gristmill turns
burden of stone, its authority crushes
the spirit. Who can break this 
massive millstone, treading over 
the tormented masses?

A desperate angst arises to rid the 
wretched bile that contaminates the land
strike down the carnivorous bear
and with sheer will and determination
break the terrible gristmill of tyranny.



Written on 5/22/2018

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 6/22/2018 9:09:00 AM
Powerful insight and much to ponder in this well written rendering. Many congrats on your win. Elaine
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Laura Leiser
Date: 6/22/2018 11:35:00 AM
Thank you for commenting, Elaine. I really appreciate it!
Date: 6/22/2018 6:49:00 AM
Congratulations on your win!
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Laura Leiser
Date: 6/22/2018 11:35:00 AM
Thank you, Susan!
Date: 6/19/2018 6:46:00 AM
Powerful write Laura, Well written. Congrats on your win..
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Laura Leiser
Date: 6/20/2018 11:56:00 AM
Thank you, Joseph! So glad you liked my take on the theme :)
Date: 6/18/2018 9:31:00 PM
Congratulations Laura. Tom.
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Laura Leiser
Date: 6/20/2018 11:56:00 AM
Thank you, Tom! You are very kind and encouraging :)
Date: 6/5/2018 9:30:00 PM
I really like the slant you took on this topic and the delivery. I felt all that you were saying and the misery of countless humans who endured such conditions. To me, this is a winner because it captures so much of where the topic takes me. You did justice to the human condition as subjected to such a life, so sad. All the best ... CayCay
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Laura Leiser
Date: 6/22/2018 11:39:00 AM
Thank you for your insightful comments, Cay Cay. We have much to be thankful for in our free society!
Date: 5/26/2018 6:16:00 PM
Excellent. Visual, topical and thought provoking. I'm sure this poem speaks for others. Thanks for sharing.
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Laura Leiser
Date: 5/26/2018 7:06:00 PM
Thank you so much, Richard! So glad you liked my poem. :)
Date: 5/23/2018 9:45:00 AM
You write angst very well and I could feel it in the poem.. You have improved a lot as a poem Laura..
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Laura Leiser
Date: 5/23/2018 11:57:00 AM
Thank you, Silent! I'm glad you are back!! :)
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