The Green Eyed Lad

~The Green Eyed Lad~ Nah Then, I’d like to spin you a yarn and weave a story for you to enjoy It’s about a lad I know and I would have liked to have met as a boy He is well traveled and I believe well read His family worldwide they now seem to have spread. Age is there now and his maturity abounds, A deep sense of fun though is still around. His eyes are green even though I’ve not seen He says they are fading, but I bet they still gleam. We have never met we are miles apart. But I don’t have to see him for him to capture my heart He has a deep affection for the place of his birth He writes with a skill a longing and mirth. It would have been nice to play up Wingate Nick Share spice, have fun, and then take the mick. We could have made up such fanciful fables But we can’t go back or wish no, no one is able. And round Heber’s Ghyll and perhaps Sugar Hill At the bottom of which the Post Office is still. His words that soothe and manipulate my senses Upbuilding and mindful, no need for defenses. If ?we met for a dinner He’s say “Get yourself outside of that” I think… Because that’s the way they speak, they are violets that don’t shrink It would have been fun to meet him weaving and plying his trade Bought up with the clickerty clack that the weaving looms made. But time passes us by and at too great a speed Events mold our lives how they want, and not how we need So to this green eyed lad I say thanks for being there You know who you are, it's up to you if you share….
©~GG~ 17/08/2012
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Johnson Avatar
April 1, 2014 at 6:13 PM
This is my favorite one in the contest. Love, Joyce
May Avatar
April 1, 2014 at 11:22 AM
Great story Mandy...congrats on the win
Mehta Avatar
April 1, 2014 at 2:06 AM
Wonderful take on the green theme, congrats on the fine win, mandy
A   Avatar
April 5, 2013 at 7:33 PM
Mandy, Congratulations in Francine's, contest.. nice "Wearing of the Green" entry. always~ Linda
Jones Avatar
April 4, 2013 at 6:25 PM
Congrats Mandy...I think we all feel this way...great poem....
Roberts Avatar
April 3, 2013 at 3:17 PM
wow Mandy this is great, hmm how about a greeneyedgirl story hint hint.....Seren
Jerden Avatar
April 3, 2013 at 2:36 PM
I really like this one Mandy. Now that I know, it's Harry, I like it even better. I'm so intrigued by his poetry. So many layers... I feel like I'm just skimming the surface on the first read. Of course, that's what he wants, isn't it, the sly devil!
Horsman Avatar
April 2, 2013 at 4:21 PM
congrats Mandy, lovely poem, deserved winner....
Hunter Avatar
April 2, 2013 at 6:44 AM
Mandy, you are a classic storyteller. Congrats!
Gasun Avatar
April 2, 2013 at 4:51 AM
Big congratulations on your fantastic win my dear friend Mandy! Big hugs and cheers! Thank you also for sharing this great write of yours. Have a nice day! love always, Leonora
Roberts Avatar
April 1, 2013 at 11:26 PM
congrats on your win in the contest Mandy, great job
Horne Avatar
August 24, 2012 at 2:33 PM
LOL, you forgot your birthday? Sending you belated birthday hugs. A lovely tribute to Harry. Congrats on your wins, my friend : )
Song Avatar
August 20, 2012 at 4:08 PM
Such a great green-eyed lad u have chosen to write about...Harry is well portrayed in this rhyming tale! Fun read, GG! --Things haven't slowed down much but I am popping in and out to check up on my friends and their work! :) Keep spinning that gold! gwendolen
Dietrich Avatar
August 17, 2012 at 10:41 PM
aha, so it's Harry!!! I was thinking he was one that it could be and I looked down and saw that indeed it was him. yep, a green eyed laddie he is and a very nice gentleman!!
Brown Avatar
August 17, 2012 at 9:29 AM
It is a pleasure to be reading so many diverse poems this morning GG. I am very happy to have been able to read yours. Thank you for sharing your well written poetry always. Have a very beautiful and joyful weekend. Love, Carol
Horsman Avatar
August 17, 2012 at 7:37 AM
Mandy Tams, you're spoiling me, and i love every minute and every word of it. already gone to my fav, you really are a sincere friend, and with all the love and talent that you gladden our heart with, i'm so proud to be yours. Harry, p.s. as i sit here writing this comment, my I-Pod burst forth, with, Queens Ä Special kind of Magic' How appropriate. they must have know.
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
August 17, 2012 at 8:00 AM
Glad you like it xx
Williams Avatar
August 17, 2012 at 7:16 AM
I would reply but my eyes are hazel!!!
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
August 17, 2012 at 8:02 AM
Bloody hell how am I supposed to fit that in ....xx
Williams Avatar
August 17, 2012 at 6:02 AM
Mandy I know who you mean, shall I soup him ha ha ha....oh I like it...Dave
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
August 17, 2012 at 6:05 AM
Of course you may ... what colour are yours??? xx
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