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The Green Bike

It stands propped against a wall in my memory, that green two wheeler bike, my first, bought second hand from a neighbor. A deep, gravel graze I got from learning to ride it, I swear, still pains a phantom nerve in my now arthritic knee after all these years. How I loved that bike, its dented frame wearing layers of paint pitted by history, its last coat was a thick glaze of leftover house paint the same green color used as trim on window frames and fences fashionable back then. To me it was a gem. I rode it to the boundaries of my world carried on the smooth ride and hum of its tyres, sank its rims deep into the muddy riverbank and raced around a track that skirted the football ground. That bike was pure freedom for me. One day someone took it and left it hooked on a tree in the local park. The top bar of its frame had been snapped clean through. Beneath the layers of paint, rust had eaten away its metal core. In tears I wheeled it home and put it in the shed and closed the door. It was like closing a book on part of my life.

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Date: 7/22/2024 3:08:00 PM
Another wonderful poem and journey Paul…..you on your green bike and me on my orange stingray with white seat and big coloured flowers!! What fun we had Paul haha!! Loved your poem as per.…though saddened by the last verse….a mean act that stayed with you a lifetime! Debx
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Paul Willason
Date: 7/29/2024 3:12:00 PM
Sorry Deb, missed a reply to yr comment, do apologise. That stingray bike sounds a classic. Funny how bikes take up a privileged place in our memory...the first instruments of freedom I guess. Thankyou my friend for introducing me to "stinga"...the flowers would have been an issue for a boy though. Paul
Date: 7/20/2024 9:25:00 PM
Thanks, Paul. Brings the memories rushing back of my first bike. Like you say, 'pure freedom!' :) Gershon
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Paul Willason
Date: 7/21/2024 3:15:00 AM
I think we all treasure memories of our first bike...thankyou Gershon for reading the poem and commenting...valued my friend.
Date: 7/19/2024 11:02:00 AM
Ironically, my first two-wheeler was also second hand, as well as green. I recall my dad threatening to sell it if I didn't ride. We're talking way back when. I didn't want to get on it, but when I learned to ride, I didn't want to get off. I think I was about 8. Thanks for jogging a sweet memory, Paul.
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Paul Willason
Date: 7/21/2024 3:13:00 AM
There you see...we not only share a love affair with the moon but have a intersect in personal history in the shape of a 'green two wheeler'. It's a real bonus for me to kearn that I have jogged a sweet memory... Appreciate the lovely feedback Lin...
Date: 7/19/2024 8:28:00 AM
You create such a vivid picture, I'm sure I had the breeze in my hair too. Your story is so full and vibrant - sharing not just a bike ride but a relationship and a determination of character. You are intensely likeable through these glimpses and that spreads joy as it passes to the reader who then has an uplift to their day. Thank you Paul for sharing
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Paul Willason
Date: 7/21/2024 3:05:00 AM
I blush dear DD...your kind words mean a lot to me and give a joy in learning that my poetry can be viewed as uplifting. You do me a great honor my friend....thankyou.

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