The Green Bike

It stands propped
against a wall in my memory,
that green two wheeler bike, 
my first, bought second hand 
from a neighbor. 
A deep, gravel graze I got 
from learning to ride it, I swear,
still pains a phantom nerve
in my now arthritic knee
after all these years.

How I loved that bike,
its dented frame wearing 
layers of paint pitted by history,
its last coat was a thick glaze
of leftover house paint 
the same green color used 
as trim on window frames
and fences fashionable 
back then.
To me it was a gem.

I rode it to the boundaries
of my world carried on the
smooth ride and hum 
of its tyres, sank its rims
deep into the muddy riverbank
and raced around a track
that skirted the football
ground. That bike
was pure freedom for me.

One day someone took it
and left it hooked on a tree
in the local park. The top bar
of its frame had been 
snapped clean through. 
Beneath the layers of paint, 
rust had eaten away 
its metal core. 
In tears I wheeled it home
and put it in the shed and closed
the door. It was like closing
a book on part of my life.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024


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Date: 7/22/2024 3:08:00 PM
Another wonderful poem and journey Paul…..you on your green bike and me on my orange stingray with white seat and big coloured flowers!! What fun we had Paul haha!! Loved your poem as per.…though saddened by the last verse….a mean act that stayed with you a lifetime! Debx
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Paul Willason
Date: 7/29/2024 3:12:00 PM
Sorry Deb, missed a reply to yr comment, do apologise. That stingray bike sounds a classic. Funny how bikes take up a privileged place in our memory...the first instruments of freedom I guess. Thankyou my friend for introducing me to "stinga"...the flowers would have been an issue for a boy though. Paul
Date: 7/20/2024 9:25:00 PM
Thanks, Paul. Brings the memories rushing back of my first bike. Like you say, 'pure freedom!' :) Gershon
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Paul Willason
Date: 7/21/2024 3:15:00 AM
I think we all treasure memories of our first bike...thankyou Gershon for reading the poem and commenting...valued my friend.
Date: 7/19/2024 11:02:00 AM
Ironically, my first two-wheeler was also second hand, as well as green. I recall my dad threatening to sell it if I didn't ride. We're talking way back when. I didn't want to get on it, but when I learned to ride, I didn't want to get off. I think I was about 8. Thanks for jogging a sweet memory, Paul.
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Date: 7/21/2024 3:13:00 AM
There you see...we not only share a love affair with the moon but have a intersect in personal history in the shape of a 'green two wheeler'. It's a real bonus for me to kearn that I have jogged a sweet memory... Appreciate the lovely feedback Lin...
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