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The Greatest Show On Earth Two

The Greatest Show on Earth - Two Mr. Pik lived alone, across our street All the kids knew him, dressed up so neat; Mr. Pik loved the circus – every kind - Each year, in our mailbox, tickets, we’d find; Finally the night came and none too soon Excitement growing by light of the moon Girls dressed in dresses – shoes – patent leather Boys in bow ties – no matter the weather. Families scrunched in old station wagons Sounding just like an asthmatic dragon; First came the clowns with red funny noses Squirting the crowd – water from fake, roses; Next, the acrobats riding sleek horses, Purples plumes on their heads – never off course; Walkers on tightropes leaving us breathless – Covered our eyes, watching never the less; Finally the last act – our hearts would seize - Daring young man on the flying trapeze; A rollicking, boisterous evening of mirth Mr. Pik’s gift – the greatest show on earth. 5-10-21 Contest: Rhyming Couplets Sponsor: Janice Canerdy Every year our neighbor, Mr. Pik – a widower – would treat the neighborhood to a night at the circus.

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Date: 5/17/2021 9:14:00 PM
Sam, Great use of imagery. I could picture the children going to the circus and the ending was superb with the last act the man on the flying trapeze.
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 5/19/2021 10:13:00 AM
Evelyn, thank you so much for your visit to the circus with me. So grateful for your lovely message - it is a gift like Mr. Pik's circus tickets. All the best to you.
Date: 5/10/2021 5:20:00 PM
I just love this!!! So sweet and loving... love it. God bless you always friend. Love, Gina
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 5/19/2021 10:10:00 AM
How could I have missed your sweet message my friend - mea culpa! This is a treasured memory from childhood. Thank for sharing in the joy of it! Sending you blessings of joy! My love and a hug! :D

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