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The Greatest Show On Earth Two

The Greatest Show on Earth - Two

Mr. Pik lived alone, across our street
All the kids knew him, dressed up so neat;

Mr. Pik loved the circus – every kind -
Each year, in our mailbox, tickets, we’d find;

Finally the night came and none too soon
Excitement growing by light of the moon

Girls dressed in dresses – shoes – patent leather
Boys in bow ties – no matter the weather.

Families scrunched in old station wagons
Sounding just like an asthmatic dragon;

First came the clowns with red funny noses
Squirting the crowd – water from fake, roses;

Next, the acrobats riding sleek horses,
Purples plumes on their heads – never off course;

Walkers on tightropes leaving us breathless –
Covered our eyes, watching never the less;

Finally the last act – our hearts would seize -
Daring young man on the flying trapeze;

A rollicking, boisterous evening of mirth
Mr. Pik’s gift – the greatest show on earth.

5-10-21
Contest: Rhyming Couplets
Sponsor: Janice Canerdy

Every year our neighbor, Mr. Pik – a widower – would treat the neighborhood to a night at the circus.
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Swartz Avatar
May 17, 2021 at 9:14 PM
Sam, Great use of imagery. I could picture the children going to the circus and the ending was superb with the last act the man on the flying trapeze.
Kauffman Avatar
May 19, 2021 at 10:13 AM
Evelyn, thank you so much for your visit to the circus with me. So grateful for your lovely message - it is a gift like Mr. Pik's circus tickets. All the best to you.
Mcintosh Avatar
May 10, 2021 at 5:20 PM
I just love this!!! So sweet and loving... love it. God bless you always friend. Love, Gina
Kauffman Avatar
May 19, 2021 at 10:10 AM
How could I have missed your sweet message my friend - mea culpa! This is a treasured memory from childhood. Thank for sharing in the joy of it! Sending you blessings of joy! My love and a hug! :D
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