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" THE GREAT SURPRISE " FROM MY ROOF GARDEN, MY PHOTO, ©

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What a great surprise for us all would be 

When death the mighty we manage to see

And as soon ourselves into death's arms throw

Realize we don't end there but still grow!








© Demetrios Trifiatis
       23 June 2018

10-10-10-10

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 7/7/2018 6:15:00 AM
Hello Demetrios!! A perfect rhyme here on a common circumstance that confronts all of us eventually in this life. Your poetic precision on this theme is wondrous. Yes, Death does come for all of us, but it is a transition stage to the greater ethereal reality and to eternity itself. Superb Work!! Cheers and Best, Gary
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Date: 6/23/2018 4:17:00 PM
Amen and Amen my friend. Great Stuff. God Bless, JB
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Date: 6/23/2018 7:40:00 AM
DT, I like where you went here. An interesting and inspirational write. My personal belief is death is a door. And there's a door at the end of every path. What's on the other side has much to do with what path you're on.
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Date: 6/23/2018 2:38:00 PM
Yes, my friend, L.M. death is the end of every path as well as a new beginning! Very true that it depends on what path we are one! The question is : Will we open it with a pleasant anticipation or with a sense of fear? For those on the right path it is just a joy to open that door! Thank you for your kind visit and profound comment!
Date: 6/23/2018 7:24:00 AM
Death is the gateway to a higher life of a new dimension and personal and spiritual growth dearest friend. In knowing that there should be only joyful anticipation.....Maria xxx
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Date: 6/23/2018 2:35:00 PM
You my dearest, Maria, I know are very knowledgeable in spiritual matters for this reason your understanding is deep! Thank you!
Date: 6/23/2018 6:17:00 AM
So hard for mortals to throw into death's arm..though we will all get there. Perhaps, only a select few get to the destiny you describe. Either way, you my friend know the ways of the almighty.
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Date: 6/23/2018 2:33:00 PM
No human knows all the ways of the almighty my friend, Vijay BUT a profound faith in Him renders a person wiser! Thank you for your gracious comment! God bless you!
Date: 6/23/2018 5:40:00 AM
A Rhyme of powerful Faith.. a wonderful soothing bliss.. a blessing from God to have within us this immense belief and relief.. A Faith that keeps us ignited on our journey of life looking forward to realms beyond perception! Your works of art are not only a great pleasure to read but also inspiring and enlightening! A FAV for me. Thank you so much dear Demetrios for sharing. Shine and stay blessed always.
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Date: 6/23/2018 2:30:00 PM
I am certain you are a lady of great faith his fact enables you to see deep into the nature of the soul and its relationship with God thus your profound comments! Thank you dearest , Besma for your precious visits and comments! God bless you!
Date: 6/23/2018 12:26:00 AM
How true Demetrios, then our new life will begin, death is only a gateway to a greater life. Tom
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Date: 6/23/2018 4:07:00 AM
Yes, my friend, Tom it is true! After posting this poem of mine I recalled a true story that took place on the Acropolis in Athens which I posted just now with the title: THE GREAT SURPRISE A TRUE STORY. Thank you so very much!