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In the daylight hours, I spend my time So high on a perch, in a lofty pine Where I fluff and comb my pretty plumes And wait for the rise of the silver moon I bob and weave on the top of the tree Watching my world, in dimensions of three My golden eyes fixed, on the fallen leaves As I wait for the night, so patiently At the set of sun, and the rise of moon In the Croatan forest, near Camp Le Jeune With a piercing screech, I take to the sky On the wind, with silent wings, I fly Over forest and swamps, on a winter night Dipping and swaying like a wind-blown kite In search of a rabbit, a rat or a bat Until I find one, there's no turning back Over Emerald Isle, and wind-swept dunes I fly, so freely, beneath a silver moon For miles along the Atlantic shore Engrossed in the din of the ocean's roar I hear from a distance, the stir of a hare And see her dining, on sea grasses there Her nibbling nose, like a lure, to my eyes As I, with the speed of lightning, fly Then swooping straight down, without a sound I wrap my talons, so tightly around The slow, soft beat, of a dying heart As bits of fur, fly away in the dark A Great Horned Owl, I'm a bird of prey With the wind at my back, I make my way With the chill of winter, a melt on my breast I return triumphantly to my nest. ~~~ For contest sponsored by Eve Roper Owls Personification Placed: 2nd Written: February 12, 2016 Elaine Cecelia George, of Canada

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Date: 10/30/2016 5:51:00 PM
I don't believe I saw this one before. I am glad to see it took second place. I remember that contest!! Don't think I saw the winners' list.Anyway, Congrats. And I really like your portrayal of this great white owl.
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Date: 11/1/2016 10:27:00 PM
Thank you for stopping by, Andrea. Lainey
Date: 7/26/2016 1:24:00 PM
love the personification Elaine - i adore owls but never see them in the wild on our little Island only in the wildlife park - congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 5/12/2016 11:39:00 AM
Beautiful in the most unique way.. Loving this piece so much
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Date: 3/20/2016 9:02:00 AM
Elaine, a beautiful write, and wow, you made it so visual, part of me weeps for the hare, but it is life in the wild, CONGRATULATIONS and I am loving this 7 ~
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Date: 2/29/2016 10:13:00 PM
A wonderful write and an accurate personification of the owl. I really enjoyed reading your poem very much... Congrats on a great win, Elaine!
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Date: 3/1/2016 5:43:00 AM
Thank you for your kind comments, Kelly. Much appreciated. Elaine
Date: 2/16/2016 12:40:00 PM
Elaine, Congratulations on your "Owls Personification form WIN." Always ~LINDA~
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Date: 3/24/2016 2:58:00 PM
Thank you got stopping by Linda and for your kind comments. Sorry I didn't respond to this sooner. Your devoted fan, Elaine
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Date: 2/16/2016 12:47:00 PM
Elaine, this one is my favorite from all the entries. HUGS... LINDA
Date: 2/16/2016 11:31:00 AM
A well deserved win!!!
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Date: 2/17/2016 2:04:00 PM
Thank you, Sarita. Elaine
Date: 2/16/2016 11:28:00 AM
Oh Elaine, this is one of your best poems. The detail you make us aware of like in your seventh stanza. This is magnificent and a fave for me! #7 ; )
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Date: 2/17/2016 2:11:00 PM
Thank you dear Connie. You are always so supportive of my writing and I hope you know how much it means to me. Sincerely, Elaine
Date: 2/16/2016 1:11:00 AM
Wonderful write Elaine n so is the win.. big congrats!
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Date: 2/17/2016 2:22:00 PM
Thank you so much, Upma. Elaine
Date: 2/16/2016 1:10:00 AM
Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 2/17/2016 2:35:00 PM
Thank you so much, Susan. Elaine
Date: 2/15/2016 6:00:00 PM
Way to go Elaine!!! This is a brief "tour de Owl" quietly leading us on an overnight trip on silent wings. Well done.
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Date: 2/17/2016 2:50:00 PM
Thank you so much, John. I loved writing this. Elaine
Date: 2/15/2016 11:05:00 AM
Grteat write Elaine...Congrats on your win
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Date: 2/17/2016 2:54:00 PM
Thank you so much, Joe. Elaine
Date: 2/15/2016 10:34:00 AM
well done good poem congrats xxx
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Date: 2/17/2016 2:57:00 PM
Thank you so much Wendy. Elaine
Date: 2/15/2016 10:04:00 AM
Your owl covered lots of ground with this one, Elaine...a very nice win. Congratulations.
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Date: 2/17/2016 2:57:00 PM
Thank you, Lin. Elaine
Date: 2/15/2016 9:50:00 AM
So very descriptive and well-written, Elaine. Congratulations on your fine win! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 2/17/2016 2:57:00 PM
Thank you Sandra. Elaine
Date: 2/15/2016 7:08:00 AM
Ah my dear, back to say congratulations on this prize winning write. A very deserving winner, Elaine. Peace:)
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Date: 2/17/2016 1:19:00 PM
Thank you so much, Daniel.
Date: 2/15/2016 3:59:00 AM
how vivid and well portrayed, elaine... i like this a lot!... huggs and congrats!
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Date: 2/17/2016 1:17:00 PM
Thank you so much Nette. Elaine
Date: 2/14/2016 10:39:00 PM
Elaine , your “The Great Horned Owl ” was wonderful! Thank you so much for writing a very special poem for my contest I was honored. Happy Valentine’s Day Hugs Eve
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Date: 2/15/2016 3:25:00 AM
Thank you Eve, The honor was all mine. Elaine
Date: 2/14/2016 7:41:00 PM
very descriptive this is. I really like it, and especially how you focused on the way the bird was flying , to different locations. like a real "bird's eye view"
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Date: 2/17/2016 2:58:00 PM
Thank you so much, Andrea. Elaine
Date: 2/14/2016 3:08:00 PM
This my friend, is epically good.. I was in flight with you(the owl) all the way. Amazing verses one and all. A7
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Date: 2/17/2016 3:00:00 PM
Thank you so much, Robert. Elaine
Date: 2/14/2016 11:36:00 AM
Your have a gift in telling a story that lets the reader feel a part of what is unfolding before them. Well written. Emile.
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Date: 2/17/2016 1:14:00 PM
Thank you so much for you very kind comments, Emile.Elaine
Date: 2/14/2016 6:44:00 AM
Excellent personification, Elaine! I followed every move you made, enjoying the scenery, as you took to the sky and went in search of prey. The 2nd to last stanza is quite touching. #7 ~ Regards .. and happy Valentine's Day:) // paul
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Date: 2/17/2016 12:51:00 PM
Thank you so much for your kind comments Paul. Elaine
Date: 2/13/2016 4:35:00 PM
Hello, Elaine, I like your personification on the owl. You did wonderful flying and describing the purity of the Great Horned Owl. Right now, Owls are being symbolized all over Texas. Glad to see you are not scared of heights. Love it my! ;) Happy Valentines to you..... XOX ~Love LINDA~
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Elaine George
Date: 2/17/2016 12:50:00 PM
Thank you so much, Linda.
Date: 2/13/2016 10:44:00 AM
you did a wonderful job with this one...great personification! Wonderful images! Good luck in the contest!
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Elaine George
Date: 2/13/2016 2:10:00 PM
Thanks for your kind comments and for your soup mail, Sandra. Much appreciated.
Date: 2/13/2016 6:52:00 AM
You have done well here, Elaine. A vivid personification.
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Elaine George
Date: 2/13/2016 6:54:00 AM
Thank you, Daniel!
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