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Grand dreams that weep from vaults amidst the rain Rouge billowed cheeks bleed soft from twilight's hem Each star bounds heaven's breast, one glistened gem All birthed from realms thus spawned to dwindle pain To reach those depths where fancies bloom and grow Ebbed tides sweep back from shores of eddied cares Should whimsy breed bold thoughts found unawares Cleft 'tween the real and those things we can't know Are what 'midst trance and nightmares we thus wind Perhaps, through strife and heartaches we might find Each great escape waits deep ... with heart and mind. ~ Honorable Mention ~ in the "STRAND Any Form Any Theme" Poetry Contest, Brian Strand, Judge & Sponsor. * For John Hamilton, who was the motive and inspiration for this poem - our greatest escape always awaits us ... INSIDE. (Sorry for the mess-up). *

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Date: 1/18/2020 10:44:00 PM
Hi Greg, Beautiful flow! Congrats!
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Date: 1/18/2020 10:43:00 PM
Hi Greg, This piece flows so wonderfully as an acrostic - one line building on the previous line. Have always loved acrostics. Your acrostic builds to the end with wonderful images. Congratulations on your HM - well deserved.
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Date: 1/15/2020 2:48:00 PM
Another delightful write and homage to a respected fellow poet. "Each great escape waits deep ... with heart and mind." I'm always entranced by your silky smooth meter and rhymes, your IP shines brightly, and your choice of words sing poetically. Well done, Bard! ~ John
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