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The Great Collide

Interwoven between big and small. An infinite reality with finite exposure. What good is living if we cannot but crawl? To ponder is to question composure. I cannot understand the notion of nothing, when the senses are so real. if I'm just energy compressed In form, why am I able to feel? Are we the only ones that gets to be conscious in our observation? Do the stars look back in frustration? Wondering why we cannot fathom the effect of our delusion. Are we here for seclusion? Too far gone to re try and reuse us? The universe speaks and I cannot understand. Are we meant to evolve or hide in the sand? Distract ourselves from true wonder and thought. I'd like to think there was a time that we all just forgot. We knew who we were and where to go. We, like the sky meant to grow. Everything and nothing, the great collide. We could not hold together long enough to align.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 3/8/2014 6:14:00 AM
Hello, Zackary, I'm a little late, however, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and offer positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to my contest and poetry page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 2/23/2014 4:09:00 PM
Zackary a big welcome, I like the idea of frustrated stars, keep writing....David
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Date: 2/23/2014 7:12:00 AM
Hi, Zackary, , Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will find much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your way of writing. But, for the mean time, I will greet you with the same smile, other poets passed when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 2/23/2014 6:27:00 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Zackary - I choose your first great written poem - hope you will write many poem in the future- Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/23/2014 4:12:00 AM
Nice... Enjoyed... Verlena
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