The Great Before

Long time past, I tumbled, twisted and turned
in dark space, only a speck, a conscious thought 
part of a mineral mass hurtling
on a never-ending path
away from our star's radiating warmth.

In the cool darkness before
I could not see.
Taken from my spinning content,
thrust into life,
filled with wonder that I could be.

Unremembered adventures now passed
are still faint in my mind.
I cried with fear from long not being
consoled only by a warm caress.

Then my heart lifted, awakened to the evening lanterns
that illuminated my beloved Kaifeng city
my intellectual home, my Karmic delight.

Once again the cycle changed
and with it too I went.

Then the beating sun across the Nazca desert plane
as again I fell into life's first breath.
Domination over others my ego's refrain.
Powerful legs propelled my run into battle
as I greeted my next death.

Then deep in darkness, the sea around us all,
Nubian labored breath was close amidst the storm,
so hard we rowed.
A quickened pulse in fear as I gasped
and finally submitted to drink the sea.

Nothing meant anything to me,
thoughts only a blur of a dimming past.
Now, feelings persist even though
I cannot tell you why.

The new day strikes me
with a blast of light.
The now has meaning, 
the after, eternally bright.


Note: Tribute poem to David Whyte, British/Irish writer, poet, thinker.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Carber Avatar
December 23, 2021 at 7:53 AM
I like this--and love the last 2 stanzas--even though I may not be smart enough to understand it all [e.g., 'Kaifeng city'?]. Having experienced my soul 'first-hand' as it were, I often wonder where it goes 'between acts'....
Gaul Avatar
December 23, 2021 at 12:43 PM
L.J., your comments are awakened and make sense. And I find your humility so engaging. Kaifeng was a 10th Century Chinese capitol city. The first million person city in the world and a cultural iconic city for philosophy and the arts in China, sorta like Paris of China. Thanks again so much. Be well, poetic hugs.
Roper Avatar
October 16, 2020 at 11:02 AM
Congratulations on your win, Greg, love the deep feeling and imagery in your poem. Hugs Eve
Gaul Avatar
October 16, 2020 at 2:05 PM
Eve, your comments are very kind and helpful. A poet of your talents leaning in and giving encouragement is inspiring. Thank you.
Marcum Wong Avatar
June 26, 2019 at 6:50 PM
What a wonderful tribute Greg! I see why it took top honors. Congratulations my friend! : ) xxoo
Gaul Avatar
June 26, 2019 at 9:14 PM
David Whyte sent me signed note of appreciation. Appreciate your visit and respect your acumen. Thanks so much dear poetess.
Barry-Nishanian Avatar
April 12, 2018 at 10:08 PM
Very nice and very DEEP, one I need to reread, Congrats, bbn
Gaul Avatar
April 13, 2018 at 7:26 AM
Truly an ambitious treatment of an uncommon topic. Your kind comments, which are most thoughtful, give me pause and for a moment I dare to entertain that it may touch a few. Certainly it did you. Appreciated your intelligent read.
Gauthier Avatar
April 9, 2018 at 12:07 PM
Congrats on your win, Greg. Wonderful penning.
Gaul Avatar
April 9, 2018 at 12:17 PM
Most appreciate your review and positive commentary.
Roper Avatar
April 7, 2018 at 12:25 PM
Excellent write, Greg, congratulations on your win... Hugs Eve ~`*
Gaul Avatar
April 7, 2018 at 1:14 PM
Very kind of you to respond Eve, most appreciated.
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