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The Gray Pods

In pods, pale and emaciated- muscles atrophied, they sit behind thick goggles deflecting stroboscopic lights; huge headsets droning weird sounds. Each human in a private pod lost in grounded bliss: every want and need, fulfilled thru technological wonders; instant information, entertainment. Touch of a button simulation to other places, via virtual reality. No need to travel. Invited humans to visit in 3-D; necessities, via robotic drones. In pods, ashen and gaunt, they sit: empty, smiles, traveling to unknown places; eyes blinded from reality, heading for grim, robotic essence. A bleak view, future existence; gray humans in gray sunless pods. The world unto themselves; life via at-whim commands. More to say on the progression- but I have too much to declare. June 11, 2017 ~5th Place~ Premiere Contest: The Bleaker The Better Sponsor: Julia Ward Judged: 06/25/2017

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Date: 7/1/2017 9:47:00 PM
A truly bleak future for human beings. Well penned sandra. Congrats! :)
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Date: 6/26/2017 10:03:00 AM
Hi, Sandra. Very interesting and thought provoking. Congrats on your well-deserved placement.
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Date: 6/25/2017 9:25:00 AM
"More to say on the progression" is a neat line before the line I set at the end - "but I have too much to declare". You worked very hard on making this poem bleak, Sandra, making sure it was one of the five I chose. All the best, Julia
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Julia Ward
Date: 6/25/2017 3:21:00 PM
I'm so pleased that my contest's theme led to your creative thinking and writing (that I saw very much in evidence).
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Sandra Haight
Date: 6/25/2017 2:22:00 PM
Julia, thank you so much for your contest with a theme that offered so much open to creative thinking and writing. I am so pleased to have made your winner's list! Sandra
Date: 6/11/2017 8:55:00 AM
That's about as bleak, grim, and lifeless as I'd ever want to imagine. It's not life at all, and you've written dire prospects for that contest. It reads like a Twilight Zone script, Sandra, and that's a compliment ;-)
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Sandra Haight
Date: 6/12/2017 8:13:00 PM
Thank you so much for the supportive comment, Lin! I really appreciate your visit and positive thoughts! Hugs, Sandra

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