The Grand Staircase

Kept calling to him As he climbed the grand staircase Never knew he'd died I climbed but could never reach him Papa turned, smiled, waved good bye ~*~
BY: Annalise Brigham FOR: Michael's "Tanka Me A Dream" Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
February 25, 2011 at 10:42 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Michael's contest Annalise. Love, Carol
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February 23, 2011 at 1:54 PM
Congrats my dear Annalise for your win in my contest... luv Michael
K. Avatar
February 23, 2011 at 1:48 AM
what a very sad dream-- but very nicely written -- Congrats on your win, Annalise :)
Poet Avatar
February 22, 2011 at 10:50 AM
Well I missed this wonderful Tanka before.Congrats Annalise on your big win in the contest---kashinath
Neels Avatar
February 22, 2011 at 10:35 AM
I enjoyed reading this one again Annalise, really beautiful.. Congratulations on your win.. Love ya Wilma
Sweetheart Avatar
February 22, 2011 at 9:17 AM
Congrats Annalise on your super win in the Dream Tanka contest with another amazing write my friend.. enjoy your top ten win with luv..
Freeman Avatar
February 22, 2011 at 8:13 AM
Good to see you in the top 10 again Annalise. Congratulations on your poem's honored Sixth place. Agape, Moses
Onclaud Avatar
February 22, 2011 at 7:48 AM
a searing write so well-crafted, anna.. bouquets for you for this happy win! :) huggs, nette
Jennings Avatar
February 22, 2011 at 6:45 AM
this is beautful and nostalgic. thank you
Pettit Avatar
February 21, 2011 at 11:58 PM
This did do well in Michael's contest as I had predicted earlier. Congratulations.
Dietrich Avatar
February 21, 2011 at 11:05 PM
This is so awesome. It reminds me of a dream I used to get sometimes after my brother Dale was taken from us by a drunk driver hitting him. Congratulations, dear.
Mannan Avatar
February 21, 2011 at 8:42 PM
So touching and lovely. Many congratulations my dear friend.
Mehta Avatar
February 21, 2011 at 5:45 PM
Congratulations on this win in the contest of Michael, Annalise
Muzzey Avatar
February 21, 2011 at 5:19 PM
Congratulations on your sixth place win, I enjoyed the read. Caryl
Kendrick Avatar
February 21, 2011 at 4:22 PM
Congratulations on your win...Sara
Johnson Avatar
February 21, 2011 at 3:43 PM
Very sad. I too have dreams of my lost ones as my poem in this contest. Congratulatons on your win. Love, Joyce
Aul Avatar
February 14, 2011 at 8:02 AM
I enjoyed your Tanka....Thanks for the comment............George
Dufresne Avatar
February 14, 2011 at 5:09 AM
This one sounds too real! masterfully done, Annalise!
Fraser Avatar
February 13, 2011 at 8:24 AM
Beautifully written Tanka Annalise, full of emotion. Have a lovely Sunday....:)
Rhinem Avatar
February 12, 2011 at 10:43 AM
Smile ~ "My Love & Warmth to 'You Always' &, All You Love, 'Forever,'" John! ~ Smile, "Have A Very 'Blessed & Beautiful' Day My Dear, Aside The Glowing Light That Always Shines In 'This, Everlasting, Stairway of Love;' Bye, 'My Dear Lovely, Precious Annalise!'":) ~
Rhinem Avatar
February 12, 2011 at 10:37 AM
Smile ~ You know, as I reread this splendid verse my dear, All that has Ever been crossed afore my sight, standing atop this "Stairway Unto, 'Heavens Door; Beautiful' & Yes, 'A Fave!!!'" ~ I hope that "Your Treasures" are doing marvellously and, "Thank You, for Always blessing my heart within such sweetened coms; but a drop of sugar within my humble cup ~ Cont:)
Rhinem Avatar
February 12, 2011 at 10:30 AM
Smile ~ "My 'Beautiful Grandfather,'" had visited my humbled self within a dream a few years or so ago and all which "His Beauty" did was, silently Smile into my eyes; and this, probably twenty years after "His Light" had passed on unto the other side, my dear ~ I love the wonderful feeling emitted from within this sweet canvas that, "Your Beauty," has brushed so brilliantly amid "The Colours of 'Such, Tender Love!!!'" ~ Cont:)
Rhinem Avatar
February 12, 2011 at 10:20 AM
Smile ~ This is an amazingly beautiful verse I would most definitely say "My Dear, 'Precious & Priceless, Beautiful Annalise!!!'" ~ I could See "'Your Beauties' Father," or any other Priceless Soul, standing atop the stairways landing, Smiling and waving, free at last free at last, thank "God Almighty," we're Free at Last ~ You know, "My Dear Blessed & Gifted Annalise," I had mentioned not too long ago that ~ Cont:)
Neels Avatar
February 11, 2011 at 8:17 AM
Annalise, this is really a beautiful Tanka you have here.. I love your last line especially.. All the best for MJF's contest, love Wilma
Pettit Avatar
February 10, 2011 at 10:27 PM
Well written tanka that should do well in Michael's contest.
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