The Grand Canyon

A canvass, deep, has been composed
between red's blend with purple hues 
Cruel paths of glaciers, mighty swords
deeply carved a threshold grand
Each turn of compass, leaves a brand,
forever leaves a breathless word
Green rivers whipped to whitened froth
have nourished pines upon the ridge
It carved a place exempt from time, and
justifies a Godly mind
Keeping watch ore' a western floor
loom monoliths on a timeless shore 
Morning suns of shimmering wines  
Nightly stars and moonlight shines
Ours to cherish and explore, 
Past and future, native lore
Question not the splendid wonder
Rejoice with eyes, behold and conquer
saturate the trails down under
That if one stands within this glory, and
understands the folklore stories,
voices freeze with questions asked, 
while sunlight peaks, where ancients gasped!
Xanadu in fact, exclaimed
You came, you saw, a crevice famed
Zenith, is Grand, and a canyon is named



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8/29/14  For Contest Sponsored by Shadow Hamilton

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 9/9/2014 10:28:00 PM
And back again with big congrats Carrie on such a winning beautiful write!
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Date: 9/9/2014 2:18:00 PM
WOW, I just love what you did here... congrats...LINDA
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Date: 9/8/2014 12:41:00 PM
I really loved this poem Carrie wonderful flow to it congrats on 1st place ty for your support hugs
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Date: 9/8/2014 6:16:00 AM
Great Abecedarian form with a unique theme; very well and easily expressed. A much deserved podium win, Carrie...congratulations! // paul
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Date: 9/8/2014 4:47:00 AM
Cleverly crafted poem, Carrie. Congrats on the win
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Date: 9/8/2014 12:36:00 AM
Excellent Carrie, congratulations.....Seren
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Date: 9/7/2014 8:15:00 PM
So cool Carrie! glad you used Xanadu!! ;) Congrad's on your win, proud to share the spot with you. Light & Love
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Date: 9/7/2014 4:02:00 PM
yor usual good job, Carrie congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 9/7/2014 1:47:00 PM
beautifully penned Carrie many congrats:-) Hugs Jan xxx
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Date: 9/7/2014 1:37:00 PM
This is a beautiful Abecedarian poem Carrie. Congratulations on a very well deserved top spot.
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Date: 9/3/2014 8:44:00 PM
I imagine that those last few lines were really difficult to compose. The whole poem is so good I can honestly say I have never read an abecedarian to match it.
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Date: 8/29/2014 11:57:00 PM
Wow as grand as the grand canyon is ur write Carrie! sure to fly high! good luck!
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