The Grand Canyon

A canvass, deep, has been composed
between red's blend with purple hues 
Cruel paths of glaciers, mighty swords
deeply carved a threshold grand
Each turn of compass, leaves a brand,
forever leaves a breathless word
Green rivers whipped to whitened froth
have nourished pines upon the ridge
It carved a place exempt from time, and
justifies a Godly mind
Keeping watch ore' a western floor
loom monoliths on a timeless shore 
Morning suns of shimmering wines  
Nightly stars and moonlight shines
Ours to cherish and explore, 
Past and future, native lore
Question not the splendid wonder
Rejoice with eyes, behold and conquer
saturate the trails down under
That if one stands within this glory, and
understands the folklore stories,
voices freeze with questions asked, 
while sunlight peaks, where ancients gasped!
Xanadu in fact, exclaimed
You came, you saw, a crevice famed
Zenith, is Grand, and a canyon is named



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8/29/14  For Contest Sponsored by Shadow Hamilton
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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A. Sharma Avatar
September 9, 2014 at 10:28 PM
And back again with big congrats Carrie on such a winning beautiful write!
A   Avatar
September 9, 2014 at 2:18 PM
WOW, I just love what you did here... congrats...LINDA
Hamilton Avatar
September 8, 2014 at 12:41 PM
I really loved this poem Carrie wonderful flow to it congrats on 1st place ty for your support hugs
Callus Avatar
September 8, 2014 at 6:16 AM
Great Abecedarian form with a unique theme; very well and easily expressed. A much deserved podium win, Carrie...congratulations! // paul
Mehta Avatar
September 8, 2014 at 4:47 AM
Cleverly crafted poem, Carrie. Congrats on the win
Roberts Avatar
September 8, 2014 at 12:36 AM
Excellent Carrie, congratulations.....Seren
Guzzi Avatar
September 7, 2014 at 8:15 PM
So cool Carrie! glad you used Xanadu!! ;) Congrad's on your win, proud to share the spot with you. Light & Love
Johnson Avatar
September 7, 2014 at 4:02 PM
yor usual good job, Carrie congratulations. Love, Joyce
Allison Avatar
September 7, 2014 at 1:47 PM
beautifully penned Carrie many congrats:-) Hugs Jan xxx
Meier-Hans Avatar
September 7, 2014 at 1:37 PM
This is a beautiful Abecedarian poem Carrie. Congratulations on a very well deserved top spot.
Zerbst Avatar
September 3, 2014 at 8:44 PM
I imagine that those last few lines were really difficult to compose. The whole poem is so good I can honestly say I have never read an abecedarian to match it.
A. Sharma Avatar
August 29, 2014 at 11:57 PM
Wow as grand as the grand canyon is ur write Carrie! sure to fly high! good luck!
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