The Grace of Life

"the grace of life"

warmth and more fill while facing the sun
light radiates leaving feelings of harmony
a day without the sun is unthinkable to souls

birds fly knowing their way with luminance
horses run with a breeze reaching their face
whales splash along waters to feel the glow

a lesson learned is to be part of the world 
follow light through the nature of animals
face the sun and let the grace of life flow

SkyWatcher
04-21-22
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Kiser Avatar
May 30, 2022 at 2:21 PM
Beautiful penning, the imagery is very relaxing.
Deo Avatar
April 27, 2022 at 5:32 AM
Thank you for these warm sentiments, Lisa. My second try today - and a shorter - comment. I cant explain why between typing and entering the CODE, I lose stuff on PS. Not a secure site? (My laptop says that often). shalom, shalom
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 26, 2022 at 2:24 PM
Lisa, your lovely poem reminds me how important and healing it is to be in the sun. I am getting over bronchitis and I will make sure to lay in the sun today. Just being out in nature helps to heal us I believe. This is a beautiful poem. Blessings and thank you, Connie xxoo
Poet Avatar
April 24, 2022 at 12:24 PM
Lisa, what a beautiful poem you've written. Allow the light to shine brightly. Very beautiful, the sun has several beneficial properties, one of which is that it may improve one's mood. The kindness of life will direct you along the proper route to take.
Ricci Avatar
April 26, 2022 at 8:34 AM
Hello Scotto - What a most elegant and gentle review and commentary. Thank you ever so much Scotto. Truly. May we all recognize the blessing of the grace of life and be part of the world. Thank you again for your generosity. Have a wonderful day. Take care and keep enjoying poetrysoup.
Baker Avatar
April 24, 2022 at 10:32 AM
Enchanting examples of, "going with the flow", Lisa. I enjoyed your poetry. Write on! Bill
Ricci Avatar
April 26, 2022 at 7:33 AM
Good Morning Bill - Hi. Thank you for the vote of confidence. May we all go with the flow for a happy and healthy life. Have a wonderful day with all good things. And yes, write on also. Take care, Blessings...
Kauffman Avatar
April 24, 2022 at 10:29 AM
Lisa, there is such gentleness in each line as we learn the lessons about being a part of the community of nature's world - stewards not masters! Enjoyed this very much! All the best!
Ricci Avatar
April 26, 2022 at 8:26 AM
Hello Sam - Thank you so very much for such a wonderful and elegant review with commentary. Truly. I very much appreciate your intake on the entry and of life as well. Have a wonderful day filled with appreciation. Now allow me to say back to you all my best... Take care and keep enjoying poetrysoup.
Proxenos Avatar
April 23, 2022 at 1:49 PM
The grace of life will lead the correct path to follow, look for beauty and nature, you will bump right into it. Great poem Lisa, Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Ricci Avatar
April 26, 2022 at 7:28 AM
Good Morning Jennifer - Thank you ever so much. Never do I take visits or reviews for granted. I very much enjoyed your commentary to which I second your thoughts of paths etc. Have a wonderful day. Blessings back to you thank you.
Horsman Avatar
April 22, 2022 at 8:46 PM
This is an excellent poem, Lisa, Yes we the human race are suppose to be superior, yet one never sees the animals stressed, unless of course, a human is involved.
Ricci Avatar
April 23, 2022 at 5:33 AM
Top of the morning to you hh - Hi. As always, thank you thank you for your visit intake and commentary. I appreciate your thoughts and wisdom. Have a wonderful morning and weekend. Keep enjoying the written word. Blessings always
Dietrich Avatar
April 22, 2022 at 3:54 PM
I like how you showed several different God's creatures reveling in the sun. So nice!
Ricci Avatar
April 23, 2022 at 5:30 AM
Hello Andrea - Good Morning. Thank you ever so much for your intake and commentary that you shared. I very much appreciate them both. Truly. Yes, we can learn from the wonderful animals. May the sun shine for all now and always. Have a wonderful morning and weekend. Keep enjoying poetrysoup. Take care and I will see you soon on your page.
Cunningham Avatar
April 22, 2022 at 10:36 AM
Nothing beats the warmth of the sun Lisa, it makes your spirits soar. Tom
Ricci Avatar
April 23, 2022 at 5:28 AM
Hello Tom - Good Morning. I agree with you regarding the sun. Thank you ever so much. May the sun shine for all and may all soar. Have a beautiful weekend. Blessings always - Take care
Buhagiar Avatar
April 22, 2022 at 8:53 AM
Indeed let the light glow. What a lovely poem you wrote. Well done. Hugs
Ricci Avatar
April 23, 2022 at 5:26 AM
Good Morning Victor - Always is there a glow when I see a visit and review from you. Thank you very much. May the sun shine for you and for all. Love and Blessings always. Remain safe please. I will see you soon on your page.
M  Avatar
April 22, 2022 at 8:47 AM
Very lovely Lisa…the sun has many powers….mood brightener being one of them for sure! Love this….Debx
Ricci Avatar
April 23, 2022 at 5:24 AM
Good Morning Deb - Hi. Thank you very much for your intake and for gracing the entry itself. Have a beautiful morning and weekend. May the sun shine for all. I will return to your page soon. Blessings always
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