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The Good, the Bad, and the Ugly

THE GOOD, THE BAD, AND THE UGLY My poetry consists primarily of rhyme This form of poetry takes little time I know I've written some so bad Written some I wish I never had But I prefer to think of the good That tell the message I think it should Like having a quiet time with God Reminded of the sinful path I've trod Poems of a child of virgin birth Born to save mankind on earth To break the chain that binds in sin So they can spend eternity with Him The good, bad, and ugly may be penned By any poet with a message to send But good outweighs the bad and ugly I say this sincerely, rather than smugly Therefore, my rhymes most likely will be About the Savior who ransomed me To help me live the life I should That others perceive me as being good Curtis Moorman 8 November 2011

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Date: 12/15/2011 11:10:00 AM
Congratulations on your super placement in Olajide's contest Curtis. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/8/2011 9:52:00 AM
I agree that the good outweighs the bad - love that whole stanza :) good luck in the contest!
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Date: 11/8/2011 6:56:00 AM
great write! enjoyed the read! ----Lori
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Date: 11/8/2011 6:23:00 AM
Dear respected Curtis Moorman, Your rhyme is above-par, Great like Sun-star, The meaning is fine, A truth so Divine, So you score cent em, Behaving like Phantom. With best wishes, Thanking you, Yours truly, mvvenkataraman
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