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The Golden Sunset

The golden sunset drew me in To gaze upon day's end beauty Like a gentle fireplace fire when The golden sunset drew me in With speed changed not like it had been Orange flame to red almost sooty The golden sunset drew me in To gaze upon day's end beauty
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Kerr Avatar
February 19, 2026 at 1:57 AM
Belated congratulations on your superb win with an equally superb poem, Sara. Vivid colour decorates this work. The hues selected flow harmoniously with literary aptitude, Howard
Kendrick Avatar
February 19, 2026 at 6:38 AM
Why, thank you, Howard. I appreciate the time spent here reading and taking time to comment. I am delighted you liked it. I had forgotten about it and thanks for reminding me and saying congrats. Sara K
Marc Avatar
December 11, 2022 at 2:32 PM
Well deserved POTD. Such a wonderful poem!
Kendrick Avatar
December 11, 2022 at 2:36 PM
Why, thank you, P.M. I appreciate the visit. Sara
Horsman Avatar
November 1, 2022 at 10:52 PM
Belated congratulation for POTD. Harry
Kendrick Avatar
November 2, 2022 at 4:27 AM
Why, thank you, Harry. I appreciate the congratulations. Sara
Dietrich Avatar
October 6, 2022 at 1:19 PM
So precious. And congrats on the POTD
Kendrick Avatar
October 6, 2022 at 1:44 PM
Why, thank you, Andrea. I appreciate you dropping by with congratulations. Sara
M  Avatar
October 6, 2022 at 2:09 AM
Sara a beautiful poem ….Congratulations on POTD. Debx
Kendrick Avatar
October 6, 2022 at 5:17 AM
Thank you, Deb. I appreciate you dropping by with congratulations. Sara
Peck Avatar
October 5, 2022 at 4:19 PM
I missed your POTD honor, Sara, as my computer was hacked and I'm putting pieces of thoughts back together. Your warm and lovely poem has its own golden glow, like the sunset. Congrats on POTD!
Kendrick Avatar
October 6, 2022 at 5:13 AM
Ann, So sorry to hear about your computer problems. We do so much with our computers today that can really upset our lives. Thanks for dropping by with congrats. Sara
Rodrigues Avatar
October 4, 2022 at 6:04 AM
Love the line: Orange flame to red almost sooty
Kendrick Avatar
October 4, 2022 at 7:16 AM
I liked that line as well. The actual sunset reminded me in its changing to some fires we once had in the fireplace long long ago. Thanks ...Sara
Nicole Avatar
October 2, 2022 at 7:26 PM
While "the golden sunset drew me in," your beautiful images leave me in complete awe. You've created a masterpiece, my dear sweet friend. Congratulations Sara, on Poem of the Day. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Kendrick Avatar
October 4, 2022 at 7:18 AM
Your visit with congratulations is awesome. I am so honored that you stopped by. Sara
Edmonds  Avatar
October 2, 2022 at 6:19 PM
A lovely poem Sara, I along with everyone else adore sunsets and you said this so well. Bless your poetic heart and congratulations on poem of the day… Belle
Kendrick Avatar
October 4, 2022 at 7:19 AM
Thank you, Belle. I appreciate the visit with congratulations. Sara
Roper Avatar
October 2, 2022 at 6:12 PM
Great imager on this verse. Congratulations on POTD. Many Blessings my friend
Kendrick Avatar
October 4, 2022 at 7:19 AM
I always need the blessings. I appreciate you dropping by with congratulations. Sara
Calasibetta Avatar
October 2, 2022 at 5:34 PM
Sara, congratulations on your lovely POTD! I love the line : "The golden sunset drew me in"...and indeed drew your readers in! :)Paulette
Kendrick Avatar
October 4, 2022 at 7:20 AM
Paulette, Your visit is phenomenal. I am glad you liked it. Sara
Darnell Sr Avatar
October 2, 2022 at 3:34 PM
Hi, Sara! Congratulations on POTD, for starters. I can see why it was chosen. The way you brought those three elements out, sunsets color, fireplaces fire, and the colorization, then metaphorically characterized them. Nicely done! Great penning, Sara, a favorite of mine, now. What a warm, and inviting read this was, thank you. Best of Wishes, William
Lawrence Avatar
October 2, 2022 at 1:41 PM
Lovely and warm feelings within me reading your poem dear Sara. Congratulations on POTD! Susan :)
Kendrick Avatar
October 4, 2022 at 2:37 PM
Thank you, Susan. I am delighted that it brought warm feelings. Sara
La France Avatar
October 2, 2022 at 11:19 AM
Sara, a lovely poem and congratulations on receiving the POEM OF THE DAY honor, Constance
Kendrick Avatar
October 4, 2022 at 2:36 PM
I appreciate your stopping by with congratulations. So thoughtful of you. Sara
Baker Avatar
October 2, 2022 at 8:57 AM
Congratulations on your POTD, Sara. The color does change as you describe it in your poem. Enjoy your special day, my friend. Bill
Kendrick Avatar
October 4, 2022 at 2:35 PM
Bill, I appreciate you dropping by and taking time to comment on my work. Sara
Wolf Avatar
October 2, 2022 at 7:59 AM
May all through the night, that golden sunset, we then revel in! A beautiful POTD, Sara. Congrats! Blessings, gw
Kendrick Avatar
October 4, 2022 at 7:36 AM
Gershon, Thanks for dropping by and for the blessings because I need all I can get. Sara
Sands Avatar
October 2, 2022 at 7:39 AM
Beautiful POTD. Congratulations Sara :)
Kendrick Avatar
October 4, 2022 at 7:33 AM
Thank you, Heidi. I appreciate the time spent here. Sara
May Avatar
October 2, 2022 at 7:15 AM
Lovely write Sara, Congrats on POTD
Kendrick Avatar
October 4, 2022 at 7:28 AM
Thank you, Joseph. I appreciate the visit. Sara
Fowler Avatar
October 2, 2022 at 7:11 AM
This is a beautiful triolet Sara. Congratulations on the honor of POTD! Linda
Kendrick Avatar
October 4, 2022 at 7:28 AM
Thank you, Linda. I appreciate the your time spent here. Sara
Buhagiar Avatar
October 2, 2022 at 6:36 AM
Congratulations for your POTD. Victor
Kendrick Avatar
October 4, 2022 at 7:15 AM
Your faithfulness in supporting my writing is excellent. Sara
Andresen Avatar
October 2, 2022 at 6:36 AM
- Congratulations on your p.o.t.d., Sara :) - hugs
Kendrick Avatar
October 4, 2022 at 7:14 AM
Kindness is the key in your stopping by. Sara
Pandit Avatar
October 2, 2022 at 6:17 AM
BIG congrats on POTD, Sara. Lovely golden sunset you convey in this poem. Enjoy your day.
Kendrick Avatar
October 4, 2022 at 7:13 AM
You are so thoughtful to stop by with congratulations. Sara
Gentile Avatar
October 2, 2022 at 6:16 AM
Sara, congratulations on your POTD honors for this marvelous Sunset Triolet!!
Kendrick Avatar
October 2, 2022 at 1:36 PM
Why, thank you, Mike. I appreciate the visit. SK
Trifiatis Avatar
October 2, 2022 at 3:53 AM
Congratulations, dearest Sara, on your POTD! Blessings!
Kendrick Avatar
October 2, 2022 at 4:47 AM
I need all the blessings I can get. Thank you for wishing them for me. Sara
Kitchin Avatar
October 2, 2022 at 3:15 AM
Sara, a wonderful poem, congratulations on POTD!
Kendrick Avatar
October 2, 2022 at 4:47 AM
I appreciate that you think so. Sara
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