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The Gold Finch At Play

A Gold Finch visited the bird bath today It seemed that he only wanted to play He stood on the rim putting just one foot in He seemed really afraid to take just a swim Then his reflection he seemed to spy Soon after he began to fly Then back down and he did the same Almost laughed when he called my name Look at me look at me Now I'm way up in the tree Then he was gone So long , so long

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 7/17/2009 7:21:00 AM
Quirky write Sara, watching wildlife can be quite amusing>>James
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Date: 7/16/2009 1:12:00 AM
I really enjoied readig this. u have a way with words
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Date: 7/15/2009 3:44:00 PM
This was so much fun to read... made me smile... and thanks for your comment on my poem today... Constance
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Date: 7/15/2009 2:31:00 PM
The gold finch is a beauty,yet i can read more deeper here,the bird who calls my name,then afraid to approach closer just flies away--beautiful you writes my friend--charma
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Date: 7/15/2009 2:18:00 PM
the Goldfinch is beautiful, nice, jim
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Date: 7/15/2009 1:57:00 PM
they are playful, aren't they? I love to see them. You have captured their essence beautifully.
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