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The Glutton

I ate and ate real quick with a swift hand then put salt in my food so none was bland I piled the pounds and ate all that I saw with each fast crave I gave in to my flaw So weak was I that bread I baked each day a pile of spread so thick I dare not say how much I ate how much I gave to Paul I will not tell but I did shove then bawl Like a wolf that scarfs it down to the bone I chomped the meat like a King on a throne so blithe was I and near to pop and burst that every shirt I own I ripped then cursed I ate for love of food but then , Oh Dear ! I have no room for a coke nor a beer . Sept. 24, 2019 Contest Name: Because Its a Tuesday 140- 140 sonnet poetry sponsor: William Kekaula

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Date: 9/25/2019 9:11:00 AM
I admit Pixie I saw this contest and I started thinking about it and all was lost until I read your poem. You have mastered it! I wish you well! Yours may be the only one. This was NOT EASY!
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Date: 9/24/2019 6:21:00 PM
what a fun sonnet Pixie, good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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