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The Glassy-Eyed Children

The glassy-eyed children watches in sleep mothers sitting on tobacco trunks on men's trunks their laughter fills the ravines with water from the stone thread fashions nipples feeding their babies. On the lady who was smiling cheerfully young men with a vanilla taste dig holes in it fresh from the steps sheltered by the man she loved piece by piece in foreign languages they call their children on right arm scribbles her name as in a barren land of a war more alive over the peace.

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Date: 9/21/2023 10:10:00 AM
I could read this a dozen times and still not fully grasp your message here, but is sure feels like great poetry Elena
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Tom Woody
Date: 9/27/2023 6:45:00 AM
You're very welcome
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Elena Mihalachi
Date: 9/27/2023 6:09:00 AM
Thank you Tom. Send you a warm hug. It is nice to read your comments. For which I am grateful. :*

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