The Girl In the Picture

She has in her hand a basket of kittens,
Holds one aloft-her gaze fixed tenderly.
All around she is festooned with little pink roses,
Down the path some distance there’s a house that we see.
Her clothes are of an age now long forgotten,
Nostalgic white dress,little jacket trimmed with lace.
A girl in a garden full of charm and beauty
Portrayed with an essence of purity and grace.
On her head pale blue bonnet,covered in violets.
Cascading from it long gold sunlit hair.
Was she real I wondered,the girl in the picture —
Or is it the artist’s heart that is captured there?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Bangalee Avatar
November 28, 2018 at 4:20 AM
certainly lovely description of picture // nice writings
Roper Avatar
November 26, 2018 at 8:03 PM
Enjoyed reading, Sylvia, very descriptive and nicely written.
Milgate Avatar
August 6, 2018 at 1:39 PM
Enjoying your poems and comment, learning as I go, so nice to have this opportunity to share and learn. Especially when unable to get about. Thank you for your comment. See your work again.
Wolf Avatar
August 1, 2018 at 5:11 PM
A classic---belongs in anthologies of literature!! Much better than 60% of the poems that I had to teach my high school students not so long ago. Well-crafted!! Best always, Gershon
Coulstock Avatar
August 19, 2018 at 8:39 AM
Wow praise indeed from a teacher! I had the picture on my wall and like an artist I studied it and instead of painting a copy I wrote the verse. So glad you appreciated it. June x
Nicole Avatar
July 30, 2018 at 8:24 PM
The images you paint are beautiful, and this girl is so alive within your words. Simply breathtaking. ~ Brandy
Coulstock Avatar
August 19, 2018 at 8:35 AM
Thank you Brandy.I am honoured by what you say considering the skilful poetess that you are. June x
Wheatley Avatar
July 23, 2018 at 11:22 AM
Wonderful imagery!
Coulstock Avatar
July 27, 2018 at 6:11 AM
Thank you Alicia.I did have the painting on my wall and it inspired me. June x
Pinet Avatar
July 21, 2018 at 10:17 AM
Your words sound good, painting a many colored canvas of sights and sounds that the reader can easily relate too. Well done my friend, Emile.
Coulstock Avatar
July 27, 2018 at 9:52 AM
Thank you Emile for your encouraging words.June x
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