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On Christmas Eve in nineteen thirty-three, a friendly visitor in Willoughby* became the center of a mystery of a bizarre and shocking tragedy . Bystanders said this girl, all dressed in blue— before they could react—just walked onto the railroad tracks, of which she had clear view. Why did she die, this girl just passing through? Attempts to learn her name were all in vain. Loose coins and a ticket for the train to Corry** in her purse did not explain who she WAS. An enigma, she’d remain. Townspeople pooled their money to provide a funeral. She was identified as “girl in blue.” Their conscience is their guide; fresh flowers for her grave are still supplied. The caring citizens of Willoughby would not find out till nineteen ninety-three the tragic girl in blue’s identity. That ticket in her purse became the key. The Corry records proved the family of Josephine Klimczak owned property in Warren County. Though the mystery was solved. “The girl in blue,” she’ll always be. Of those three thousand locals who went to that funeral, there would be very few still living when discovery of who she was came out—that unique girl in blue. Posted August 2019 Date: December 8, 2019 Contest Title: Blue Dress Poetry Contest placed 8th (of ten) Sponsor: Anthony Slausin March 28, 2023 entered in Julia Ward's Visitor Poetry Contest

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Date: 1/27/2020 10:53:00 AM
what an interesting story told in poetic form rather well...wonderful penning Janice Congratulations on your win in the contest :) hugs
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 1/27/2020 5:12:00 PM
Thanks so much, Sandra. Janice
Date: 10/10/2019 8:35:00 AM
You told the story very well, what a lovely memorial to her :-) x
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 10/10/2019 1:12:00 PM
Thanks so much, Elaine. Janice
Date: 9/7/2019 2:48:00 AM
what an interesting story, I really enjoyed this. I would like to learn more about the girl in blue...Thank you for your participation and congratulations on your placement :) -luloo
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 9/7/2019 7:26:00 AM
Thanks for my placement, Janice
Date: 8/22/2019 1:39:00 AM
Hello Janice … another fine tale from you Janice. Poets like yourself help to keep history alive - thank you Janice - Lindsay
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 8/22/2019 11:31:00 AM
Thanks so much, Lindsay! Janice
Date: 8/20/2019 4:54:00 PM
wonderfully told, janice! i very much enjoyed...
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 8/20/2019 8:37:00 PM
Thanks so much, Ilene! Janice
Date: 8/20/2019 3:11:00 PM
Your poem is a memorial to her story..your story gives the girl in blue a voice..all the best Janice.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 8/20/2019 8:37:00 PM
Thanks so much, Vijay! Janice
Date: 8/20/2019 3:02:00 PM
Well it certainly grabbed my interest all the way through,Janice. A really well written, intriguing and informative contribution! I had never heard of this case before.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 8/20/2019 8:39:00 PM
It is a fascinating story. Getting the main points into a poem was challenging! Thanks so much, Wendy! Janice

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