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August 16, 2025, entered in Mark Toney's 2025 Poetry Marathon Mile 8

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The Girl In Blue

On Christmas Eve in nineteen thirty-three,
a friendly visitor in Willoughby*
became the center of a mystery
of a bizarre and shocking tragedy .
 
Bystanders said this girl, all dressed in blue—
before they could react—just walked onto
the railroad tracks, of which she had clear view.
Why did she die, this girl just passing through?

Attempts to learn her name were all in vain.
Loose coins and a ticket for the train
to Corry** in her purse did not explain
who she WAS. An enigma, she’d remain.

Townspeople pooled their money to provide
a funeral. She was identified
as “girl in blue.” Their conscience is their guide;
fresh flowers for her grave are still supplied.

The caring citizens of Willoughby 
would not find out till nineteen ninety-three
the tragic girl in blue’s identity.
That ticket in her purse became the key.

The Corry records proved the family
of Josephine Klimczak owned property
in Warren County. Though the mystery
was solved. “The girl in blue,” she’ll always be.

Of those three thousand locals who went to
that funeral, there would be very few             
still living when discovery of who
she was came out—that unique girl in blue.

*Ohio
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Adams Avatar
January 27, 2020 at 10:53 AM
what an interesting story told in poetic form rather well...wonderful penning Janice Congratulations on your win in the contest :) hugs
Canerdy Avatar
January 27, 2020 at 5:12 PM
Thanks so much, Sandra. Janice
Perrin Avatar
October 10, 2019 at 8:35 AM
You told the story very well, what a lovely memorial to her :-) x
Canerdy Avatar
October 10, 2019 at 1:12 PM
Thanks so much, Elaine. Janice
Scars Avatar
September 7, 2019 at 2:48 AM
what an interesting story, I really enjoyed this. I would like to learn more about the girl in blue...Thank you for your participation and congratulations on your placement :) -luloo
Canerdy Avatar
September 7, 2019 at 7:26 AM
Thanks for my placement, Janice
Laurie Avatar
August 22, 2019 at 1:39 AM
Hello Janice … another fine tale from you Janice. Poets like yourself help to keep history alive - thank you Janice - Lindsay
Canerdy Avatar
August 22, 2019 at 11:31 AM
Thanks so much, Lindsay! Janice
Bauer Avatar
August 20, 2019 at 4:54 PM
wonderfully told, janice! i very much enjoyed...
Canerdy Avatar
August 20, 2019 at 8:37 PM
Thanks so much, Ilene! Janice
Pandit Avatar
August 20, 2019 at 3:11 PM
Your poem is a memorial to her story..your story gives the girl in blue a voice..all the best Janice.
Canerdy Avatar
August 20, 2019 at 8:37 PM
Thanks so much, Vijay! Janice
Watson Avatar
August 20, 2019 at 3:02 PM
Well it certainly grabbed my interest all the way through,Janice. A really well written, intriguing and informative contribution! I had never heard of this case before.
Canerdy Avatar
August 20, 2019 at 8:39 PM
It is a fascinating story. Getting the main points into a poem was challenging! Thanks so much, Wendy! Janice
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