The Girl and the Maze Keeper

When the girl fell from the branches above
She got up brushing the leaves from her hair.

The man said you must be the new lady of the house?
She replied:  Yes! I came in on the night train
And I brought the storm with me.

That's quite the power if I do say so myself
And I must say you don't look much like a girl 
With those boys' clothes, you have on there.

My mother once told me if I willed it, that the smallest
  of creatures could wield great power. 

He replied: you best listen to your mother then
Mothers tend to be right on these matters.

My mother is dead, the girl replied; that's why I've 
come to live here.
He replied: my mother too, I live here as well.

She eyed him and ask, are you a pirate just in from the sea?
He laughed a hearty laugh. And said no I'm just the maze keeper.

She looked at him funny
He pointed behind her at the twin hedges 
You best not go in there without me though. 

What's beyond  the maze of hedges 
She asks in a low voice.

A cottage that looks out over the ocean?
To watch for the smugglers and Tregenna pirates? 

Can I go there and see the lookout tower?
He replied: Oh you will never find it
Not without me of course!  She smiled.

And knew she had made her first friend
In this new mysterious land, she found
herself in.



written 6/ 6/ 2016 5 pm Monday night
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Beaufort Avatar
April 24, 2025 at 6:12 AM
Debby, I hadn't seen this before. You have a wonderful imagination and make an interesting point in a very, very clever way. There are things or states in life we cannot find or get to alone as we grow up. Having friends is a wonderful thing. They do help us a great deal. You are so smart!!!
Thomas Avatar
April 12, 2018 at 7:00 PM
Well if she's anything like I was the first thing she did was head straight for that maze that she wouldn't be able to make it through without him lol! You have a wonderful imagination Debbie!
Imtiaz Avatar
March 14, 2018 at 2:36 AM
Hi Debbie, This is mysterious ...and i would like to know what is next........you start very well and so i am curious about the next. And Thanks for reading my "Youth is Treasure"
Inman Avatar
March 13, 2018 at 8:04 PM
Your prose writing is very good. I would love to read a completed story that you have written.
Robinson Jr. Avatar
November 4, 2017 at 11:23 PM
A cool, mysterious story well-told, Debbie. Hope there will be more forthcoming. If you did do the next chapter, please tell me the name of the poem. Lovely write. Love and more love to you and yours.
Stebbings Avatar
July 4, 2017 at 9:43 AM
Intriguing, Debbie. I like these imaginative type of stories. // Barry
Rodgers Avatar
June 20, 2017 at 8:53 AM
A doubly nice story.
May Avatar
June 17, 2017 at 10:09 PM
An enchanting tale Debbie...is there a part 2?
Williams Avatar
June 17, 2017 at 7:15 AM
Nice intriguing story Debbie, is there a sequel? Will look forward to it if there is...Maria
Dietrich Avatar
June 14, 2017 at 3:47 PM
wow, was this for the character poem contest? It should be, if it is not. VERY interesting one, Debbie!
Green Avatar
June 14, 2017 at 7:38 AM
Wow, will you continue this Debbie? I really enjoyed this and hope to see what happens next. Your imagination is in overdrive on this one and I am so happy I could join in on this a-maze-ing journey. :)
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