The Girl and the Maze Keeper

When the girl fell from the branches above
She got up brushing the leaves from her hair.

The man said you must be the new lady of the house?
She replied:  Yes! I came in on the night train
And I brought the storm with me.

That's quite the power if I do say so myself
And I must say you don't look much like a girl 
With those boys' clothes, you have on there.

My mother once told me if I willed it, that the smallest
  of creatures could wield great power. 

He replied: you best listen to your mother then
Mothers tend to be right on these matters.

My mother is dead, the girl replied; that's why I've 
come to live here.
He replied: my mother too, I live here as well.

She eyed him and ask, are you a pirate just in from the sea?
He laughed a hearty laugh. And said no I'm just the maze keeper.

She looked at him funny
He pointed behind her at the twin hedges 
You best not go in there without me though. 

What's beyond  the maze of hedges 
She asks in a low voice.

A cottage that looks out over the ocean?
To watch for the smugglers and Tregenna pirates? 

Can I go there and see the lookout tower?
He replied: Oh you will never find it
Not without me of course!  She smiled.

And knew she had made her first friend
In this new mysterious land, she found
herself in.



written 6/ 6/ 2016 5 pm Monday night

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 4/24/2025 6:12:00 AM
Debby, I hadn't seen this before. You have a wonderful imagination and make an interesting point in a very, very clever way. There are things or states in life we cannot find or get to alone as we grow up. Having friends is a wonderful thing. They do help us a great deal. You are so smart!!!
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Date: 4/12/2018 7:00:00 PM
Well if she's anything like I was the first thing she did was head straight for that maze that she wouldn't be able to make it through without him lol! You have a wonderful imagination Debbie!
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Date: 3/14/2018 2:36:00 AM
Hi Debbie, This is mysterious ...and i would like to know what is next........you start very well and so i am curious about the next. And Thanks for reading my "Youth is Treasure"
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Date: 3/13/2018 8:04:00 PM
Your prose writing is very good. I would love to read a completed story that you have written.
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Date: 11/4/2017 11:23:00 PM
A cool, mysterious story well-told, Debbie. Hope there will be more forthcoming. If you did do the next chapter, please tell me the name of the poem. Lovely write. Love and more love to you and yours.
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Date: 7/4/2017 9:43:00 AM
Intriguing, Debbie. I like these imaginative type of stories. // Barry
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Date: 6/20/2017 8:53:00 AM
A doubly nice story.
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Date: 6/17/2017 10:09:00 PM
An enchanting tale Debbie...is there a part 2?
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Date: 6/17/2017 7:15:00 AM
Nice intriguing story Debbie, is there a sequel? Will look forward to it if there is...Maria
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Date: 6/14/2017 3:47:00 PM
wow, was this for the character poem contest? It should be, if it is not. VERY interesting one, Debbie!
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Date: 6/14/2017 7:38:00 AM
Wow, will you continue this Debbie? I really enjoyed this and hope to see what happens next. Your imagination is in overdrive on this one and I am so happy I could join in on this a-maze-ing journey. :)
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