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The Giraffe Cries

The Giraffe Cries Dancing on a thread of silk - taut of pain, balanced deep within the fear… Swaying to the side in calculated energy, breathing as the sweat begins to pour Toeing the line with blinders on only to face the evil waiting - miles above my last breath Shambles become my life’s dreams, as fifty or so exit the compact car below- all doors ajar Pointing skyward with gloved fingers and flowered bonnets they gasp - splashing red paint of severed smiles and floating eyebrows, merely decorations placed by hand and contractual obligations The rings add up to three - yet left alone I find is me, teetering of lost imagination and breath taking nuances, blanketing the sawdust creations of worries portrayed in a gallery of netted promises It is calling now for my end - free falling with wings to spare, a calliope whistles its crescendo beneath a tent pitched and heaved in frustration, riding the rail lines of someone else’s thoughts Not worth the price of admission - I wave as I exit this cotton candy dream world in search of the nightmares slowly unfolding along platform bridges of age and destined footpaths The train departs…the giraffe cries

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Date: 1/26/2017 2:14:00 PM
It is calling now for my end-Free falling with wings to spare..So deep this is..Dark ..Sad...I can read 'you' and find 'you' between those lines...but now you ll have to find me a crying giraffe : p
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Chris Green
Date: 1/26/2017 4:01:00 PM
Ok, I'll get right on that. :) Thank you so very much Charmaine.
Date: 1/26/2017 7:50:00 AM
I never went to a circus, and I don't think I would like it...
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Chris Green
Date: 1/26/2017 2:03:00 PM
It's fun once time...after that, it's kind of the same over and over again. Thanks for stopping by Darren.
Date: 1/26/2017 7:31:00 AM
Do giraffes really cry? I'm curious to know. Anywho ... great write. Love you, bro.
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Chris Green
Date: 1/26/2017 2:03:00 PM
Well if you find it raining on a sunny day while at the zoo...maybe. :)
Date: 1/26/2017 7:30:00 AM
Very fine poetry, Chris. Thoughtful and thought-provoking. A beautiful combo for us free thinkers. A poem w/serious chops. A lot of meat on this poetic bone. Excellent poem, my friend. Love the title too. Love and peace to you.
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Chris Green
Date: 1/26/2017 2:02:00 PM
Thanks so very much Freddie. I am glad you read deep into this one. I appreciate you my friend.
Date: 1/25/2017 9:33:00 PM
..and the Barnum and Bailey Circus is closing down .... this is a painful reminder of fleeting "joy" in the face of unseen cruelty.
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Chris Green
Date: 1/26/2017 2:02:00 PM
Thanks so much John. You hit the nail on the head.
Date: 1/25/2017 5:35:00 PM
The times have changed my friend...I remember the last time I went to a circus...when I was a kid...although loving it...I came back with a three ring headache lol...beautiful write Chris...god bless...^WW^
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Chris Green
Date: 1/25/2017 5:38:00 PM
Thanks so very much my friend. I can't even remember the last time I went to the circus.
Date: 1/25/2017 4:35:00 PM
The depth of emotion you captured here is disturbingly powerful. Darkly beautiful poem, Chris.
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Chris Green
Date: 1/25/2017 4:56:00 PM
Thanks so very much Christy. You kind words always a gift to me.
Date: 1/25/2017 2:19:00 PM
A 7 for your thought-provoking and emotional write, Chris! Janice
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Chris Green
Date: 1/25/2017 2:31:00 PM
Thanks so very much Janice, I appreciate your kindness.
Date: 1/25/2017 2:14:00 PM
Hi Chris, Although this is not what I'm used to by you, It was still well written and very good. I could sense a profound sadness and loneliness within in this dark write. The imagery and metaphors was good as well. A without a doubt seven- Alexis
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Chris Green
Date: 1/25/2017 2:31:00 PM
Thank you so very much Alexis. yeah I just figured people were getting a little sick of my flowery love poetry so I thought I add a little darkness. :)

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