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The gilded leaves of Autumn sigh- their velvet green has vanished now. They miss sweet Summer's lullaby; warm breeze caressing every bough. Their velvet green has vanished now, replaced by golds and burnished glow. Warm breeze caressing every bough- bring memory from long ago. Replaced by golds and burnished glow, they shake in the cool Autumn breeze. Bring memory from long ago- those balmy nights on moonlit trees. They shake in the cool Autumn breeze- they miss sweet Summer's lullaby, those balmy nights on moonlit trees; the gilded leaves of Autumn sigh. September 3, 2018 ~2nd Place~ Contest: Autumn Pantoum Poetry Contest Sponsor: by Caren Krutsinger Judged: 11/07/2022 ~7th Place~ Premiere Contest: Late September 2018 Sponsor: Brian Strand Judged: 09/24/2018 ~1st Place~ Contest: One In Five II Sponsor: Joseph May Theme 2: The Gilded Leaves Of Autumn Sigh Judged: 09/19/2018

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Date: 11/8/2022 2:14:00 PM
Sandra, so beautiful: those balmy nights on moonlit trees! Congratulations!
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Date: 11/8/2022 6:49:00 AM
Congratulations your win Sandra!
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Date: 11/8/2022 3:00:00 AM
A perfect pantoum, congratulations.
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Date: 11/7/2022 3:45:00 PM
So perfect. Sandra: A real Pantoum written in perfect style. No 1 in my eyes. Best, SuZ
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Date: 10/4/2018 12:07:00 PM
epic styled poetry, one someone will read and love a hundred years from now!
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Date: 10/3/2018 11:14:00 AM
A lovely poem, written beautifully. It is as soft as a sigh. Congratulations on your win. One Sandra to another. : )
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Date: 10/2/2018 10:05:00 AM
I never thought about sighing leaves of Autumn! Congratulations!
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Date: 9/30/2018 3:22:00 PM
Applause! Spectacular in every regard especially when I ponder how many autumn poems you have probably penned as though each was a first, fresh perspective. I love your talent, have from day one. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
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Sandra Haight
Date: 10/1/2018 2:09:00 PM
Thanks so much, CayCay, for your nice visit and very uplifting and complimentary comments! I am humbled but very appreciative. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 9/30/2018 1:10:00 PM
So happy this is a winner Sandra. Congratulations! : ) xxoo
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Sandra Haight
Date: 10/1/2018 2:08:00 PM
Thank you very much, Connie! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 9/25/2018 5:49:00 PM
Lovely, Sandra. You did this form justice. Congrats on your win.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 9/25/2018 7:22:00 PM
Thank you so much, Line, for your congrats and lovely comment! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 9/24/2018 1:53:00 PM
This is just a captivating poem, Sandra!:-) I love the flow and vivid imagery!
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Date: 9/25/2018 7:20:00 PM
Thank you very much, Edward, for your visit and uplifting comments! Sandra :)
Date: 9/20/2018 7:27:00 AM
Brilliant imagery, artfully depicted..congrats Sandra for your superb win.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 9/20/2018 7:40:00 PM
Thanks so much, Vijay, for your visit, congrats and lovely comments! Sandra :)
Date: 9/20/2018 4:23:00 AM
Congratulations on your fine win, Sandra with a beautiful pantoum.
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Date: 9/20/2018 7:40:00 PM
Thank you very much, Subimal! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 9/19/2018 8:03:00 PM
Those autumn leaves miss "sweet Summer's lullaby.. Congrats on your win Sandra
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Date: 9/20/2018 7:39:00 PM
Thank you, Joseph, for the great contest! I enjoyed participating and am very pleased with my placement! Sandra
Date: 9/3/2018 7:38:00 PM
Lovely pantoum Sandra, I've only written one and did not find it easy. I do love autumn though with it's beautiful colours. Tom
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Sandra Haight
Date: 9/11/2018 7:05:00 PM
Thank you, Tom, for your lovely comment. I enjoy using this form, and I am pleased that you like my poem! Sandra :)
Date: 9/3/2018 6:41:00 PM
Oh my gosh Sandra. Love your write and your nature theme. Thanks for sharing
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Sandra Haight
Date: 9/11/2018 7:04:00 PM
Thank you so much, Carlos, for your visit and kind words of encouragement! Sandra :)
Date: 9/3/2018 6:37:00 PM
Your words shine in this challenging pantoum form Sandra. This is sure to be a winner! : )
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Sandra Haight
Date: 9/11/2018 7:03:00 PM
Thank you, Connie, for your very kind comment! Much appreciated! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 9/3/2018 5:15:00 PM
gorgeous gorgeous gorgeous poem Sandra I adore the pantoum form and this is a beauty and into my faves:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/11/2018 7:03:00 PM
Thank you so much, Jan, for your lovely, uplifting comment. It is one of my favorite forms too. Hugs, Sandra

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