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The Gift You Left Behind

Innocence and beauty is what you asked me for as you lay me on the couch , then across the floor speaking softly in my ear you never came for air as I gave up my virginity, I knew you didn't care The telephone stood silent and the television mute while all I did was study, a pregnancy took root you said you needed space and that it had to be now who was I to stop you and so I set you free The years have come and gone without a soft reply although she longed to know she never asked me why And after all this time I wonder, why did I not flee, as you stole my innocence, quietly from me ; Innocence and beauty, is what you asked me for as you lay me on the couch, then across the floor. April 20, 2019 Contest Name: What was left unsaid Sponsor: Line Gauthier

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Date: 4/28/2019 2:21:00 AM
Love can be a harsh teacher when unrequited . So beautifully written Vie. Congratulations on your deserving win. : ) xxoo
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Date: 4/26/2019 6:38:00 PM
Bravo, Pixie for your two wins. Well penned.
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Date: 4/26/2019 5:51:00 PM
Wow! Pixie, your emotional expression is beautifully eloquent in the soft melancholy tone of your captivating poem. Congratulations on your excellent win. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
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Date: 4/25/2019 5:31:00 AM
Exceptionally well composed sonnet of sadness, and one of life's many losses. This is one of the very hard things that millions of women have faced and had to survive..
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Date: 4/25/2019 3:57:00 AM
A very touching write, Vi, and a circumstance many find themselves in. Great job. :)
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Date: 4/21/2019 12:00:00 PM
a beautiful poem replete with mixed emotions, vie... love the range of your theme...happy easter!...huggs
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