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The Gift That I Give You

the gift that I give you is a pair of my old black polished shoes, worn out at edges with a tear or two, keep as my memory, please don’t refuse, worn when carried you, maternity use! wrapped in paper is a lock of my hair, saved from those days when I was young and fair, just to remind I was not always old, think of me young, when you bury me cold! you will find in my dusty old suitcase, a little frock with decorative lace, my hand made gift, was for your first birthday, replete with love, when meagre was my pay. Photos, memories ~ plenty in that bag, clothes I wore, you will find many such rag, I shall hold you in heart at my last breath, all my motherly love to you I bequeath! Premium contest winner (6) Written 29/06/2021 Mystic Rose sponsored The Gift that I give you contest 10 syllables each line

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Date: 7/7/2021 9:25:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful story/write. "Love It" To be close to your mother is a blessing. Have a blessed day writing away..................
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 7/7/2021 10:52:00 AM
Paula Thanks! Very pleased with your words of appreciation!
Date: 7/7/2021 8:44:00 AM
Back to congratulate you - your write touches heart in a unique way. Your poems always remind me how close children are to their mothers - love incomparable! BW ~ Mala
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 7/7/2021 10:51:00 AM
Thanks Mala!! So pleased to hear from you.
Date: 7/7/2021 4:41:00 AM
So heartfelt--gems of genuine love! BIG congrats on your win, Krish.
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 7/7/2021 10:51:00 AM
Thanks Vijay! appreciate your kind words!
Date: 7/6/2021 11:52:00 PM
Wonderful Krish, what a gift from a loving mother to her son. Congratulations on your well deserved win. Well done! ~ Belle
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 7/7/2021 2:07:00 AM
Thanks Belle. who and what can repay a mother?
Date: 7/6/2021 11:34:00 PM
A heart touching write. Congratulations. Enjoy your day
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 7/6/2021 11:44:00 PM
Thanks Rama!:)
Date: 7/6/2021 8:14:00 PM
Beautiful. Congratulations!
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 7/6/2021 10:10:00 PM
Thanks Christuraj!! Always a pleasure to have your feedback!
Date: 7/1/2021 5:40:00 AM
Krish, this is so touching - for me, very much. "my hand made gift, was for your first birthday," - these lines I can relate to. Your poems stem from real-life experiences which are universally true. Best wishes ~ Mala
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 7/1/2021 6:31:00 AM
Thanks Mala. Yes, you are right about how close I was to my mother and how much I miss her. So do many who love their mothers. Thanks for your kind words.

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