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The Gift of Song

We are all prisoners at one time or another in our lives-Imprisoned in our minds imprisoned by the dictates of our environment; by the expectations of our society, etc. Yet, we survive. Through it all, hope and our deep, enduring faith in our God keeps us alive from generation to generation. It’s the year 1835, and there she stands on a rickety wooden platform Where countless before her had stood desolate and dejected She looked disheveled in an old cotton dress Two sizes too big for her tiny frame Her tattered boots caked with mud from the stall Where livestock was kept for the market A large crowd of men and women had gathered A river of faces were in view yet not one was familiar None similar to hers in sight except for the lonely Carriage driver sitting upright and seemingly unconcerned with The situation playing out less than ten feet away from him At the age of twelve when girls her age were at play Here she was stands on an auction block Awaiting her fate, to be re-sold for a purse full of coins These faces in the crowd leer at her and she feels like a freak Hunger and pain gnaw at her belly and mind Her body trembles in fear and she feels a chill though it’s summer Hot tears stream down her smooth black cheeks Wishing her Mama was here. “Where are you, Mama?” In silence she cries deep within, and her thoughts are interrupted By the crack of the whip that cuts body and soul! Pt. II contn’d

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 2/7/2010 11:56:00 AM
Awwwww man this is good Audrey! great write, now I have to hurry and read the next one!
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Date: 2/6/2010 4:26:00 AM
What a terribly powerful write, Audrey! You did an excellent work here and all summed up by the last line. Humanity can be so terrible and guilty even be just looking the other way. When injustice is done, speaking out is our duty or we are guilty by ommision and lots don;'t realize it. By the way thaqnk you for your awesome comment to my poem. God bless you - Robert
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Date: 2/5/2010 4:33:00 PM
Just excellent writing here, Audrey ... this could either be Narrative or Free Verse in the Form for both this one and Song II ...
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Date: 2/4/2010 4:18:00 PM
I've already read pt 2 and loved it...Very beautiful write...Enjoyed...Marty
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Date: 2/4/2010 4:19:00 AM
And we call ourselves humans, thats a laugh Daniel
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Date: 2/4/2010 1:24:00 AM
You portray the helplessness of this child with startling clarity. I will now go look at part two. first rate Audrey...Margaret
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Date: 2/3/2010 1:23:00 PM
Excellent story telling, Audrey. I would guess this to be in the narrative category!
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Date: 2/3/2010 1:11:00 PM
Audrey, The poignancy of your prose has left me very excited to read part II. Thank you for your kind comments on my poem A Broken Heart. Blessings, Connie
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Date: 2/3/2010 12:44:00 AM
Enjoyed this narrative Audrey.Rgds Brian & thanks for your kind words and observations.
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Date: 2/2/2010 7:28:00 PM
A lament of suffering and fear written quite well Audrey .. u have an excellent gift for the free verse .. but with a song interwoven into the lines.. onto part 2.. excellent.. luv.. and thankxxx for your precious comments tonight on my writings.. luv.. Linda-Marie..
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