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The Gift

My age shows on my wrinkled skin: ugly face, ugly hands! What a rage! My brief youth I mourn with regret! My grief only reflects a sad image! My wish was to remain ever young! My handsomeness has suddenly faded! My agony grows with swift time, my death approaches as a mocking fiend! Entered in Verlena S. Walker's contest, " The Gift " Written by Andrew Crisci on September 8, 2014

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Date: 9/11/2014 9:44:00 PM
This is such an awesome poem Andrew. I gave high marks but, in truth, more written would have given a greater reward. May I call you boyfriend for this awesome win. Verlena
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Date: 9/10/2014 11:24:00 PM
Congratulations and God bless you - Love and prayers ~ Gina
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Date: 9/10/2014 7:22:00 PM
Andrew, Congratulations, on your awesome, sweet wonderful win. God Bless, Love LINDA
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Date: 9/10/2014 12:08:00 PM
Lovely spiritual write, congrats. Andrew
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