The Gift

My age shows on my wrinkled skin: ugly face, ugly hands! What a rage! 
My brief youth I mourn with regret! My grief only reflects a sad image!
My wish was to remain ever young! My handsomeness has suddenly faded! 
My agony grows with swift time, my death approaches as a mocking fiend!




Entered in Verlena S. Walker's contest,
" The Gift "
Written by Andrew Crisci on September 8, 2014
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Walker  Avatar
September 11, 2014 at 9:44 PM
This is such an awesome poem Andrew. I gave high marks but, in truth, more written would have given a greater reward. May I call you boyfriend for this awesome win. Verlena
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September 10, 2014 at 11:24 PM
Congratulations and God bless you - Love and prayers ~ Gina
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September 10, 2014 at 7:22 PM
Andrew, Congratulations, on your awesome, sweet wonderful win. God Bless, Love LINDA
Mehta Avatar
September 10, 2014 at 12:08 PM
Lovely spiritual write, congrats. Andrew
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