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The Gift of Growing Old I awoke this morning with a tale to be told, about the legend of life, and the art of growing old. There was a glimpse of hope in the absence of pain, lovers holding hands and dancing in the rain. I felt the intimate alignment of heart and mind, just beyond the realm of what our eyes could find. A complete acceptance of what could be, the meaning of life, if we were just able to see. I felt the joy of my youth, certain passions once felt, the cost of my hand with each card that was dealt. A future of wisdom that I would soon attain; I saw every storm encompassed with pain. I experienced the beginning and bore witness to the end, the acknowledgement of birth and the loss of each friend. A perception of reality that was yet to unfold, I'm thankful for life and the gift of growing old. 3/19/2021 Inner alignment Poetry Contest Sponsor: Unseeking Seeker

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Date: 3/26/2021 7:00:00 PM
Excellent Mark. This is perfect in every way. Bravo. Good luck in the contest. God Bless, JB
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Mark Koplin
Date: 3/27/2021 7:34:00 AM
Thank you Judy, you are so kind.
Date: 3/20/2021 10:04:00 PM
Mark, Important gift in your poem. Life often takes us to task. Days all the more special when shared. What'll we do if they all end? -Richard
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Mark Koplin
Date: 3/21/2021 5:57:00 PM
Thanks Richard for the read. When it ends, then on to the next chapter.
Date: 3/20/2021 4:10:00 PM
"The art of growing old." What a wise perception you have, Mark. It's all about attitude. Love these lines.
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Mark Koplin
Date: 3/21/2021 5:55:00 PM
Thanks Jenna, I appreciate the compliment my friend!
Date: 3/19/2021 10:14:00 AM
I enjoyed this piece. Nice depth and flow. Darrell
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Mark Koplin
Date: 3/20/2021 2:01:00 AM
I'm glad you liked it. Thanks Darrell!
Date: 3/19/2021 9:41:00 AM
So true Mark, we have so much to be grateful for, good luck in the contest and enjoy your weekend. Tom
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Mark Koplin
Date: 3/20/2021 2:00:00 AM
Thank you Tom! I hope you have a grand weekend my friend!
Date: 3/19/2021 9:32:00 AM
Fine work, Mark. I enjoyed your poem very much and wish you the best of luck in the contest. I suspect it will rate very highly.
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Mark Koplin
Date: 3/20/2021 2:00:00 AM
Thanks Milton, I appreciate your kind words my friend!

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