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The Gentle Breeze

I usually cry if I can’t stand pressures Because its my way to overcome my fears People may think it will waste my tears What do I care as this is about my life here. I felt the wind on my face, gentle Always with me whenever I stumble Though can’t be seen and touched I appreciate its existence so much! I may look very very lonely But here in the heart of me; Thoughts of him lingers peacefully He’s naughty yet so very funny! The wind is just like him And we always make a good team Though rarely see each other Our bonds still grows stronger.. This person may be smiling; After reading this homemade poem You know him better darling; Much much more than I do Cause that person is none other than you!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 11/3/2024 6:31:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 2/26/2016 5:59:00 PM
burgeon lucremania, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 1/4/2016 2:48:00 PM
BL, enjoyed reading your poem. Hugs **SKAT**
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