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The Gem


As precious stones are hidden and entwined
   in minerals of ordinary worth,
they must be found, professionally mined
   from common, rocky layers of the earth.

Extracted, polished, cut- they'll stand apart
   as valued gems.  Neglected, they will share
in earth's destructive force- erosion's art-
   dissolve away with nature's wear and tear.

Oh God, you are both Mine and Miner; strip
   this soul embedded in your work of clay,
and let your tools of grace and fellowship
   preserve the gem of Love from life's decay.

Cut many facets that reflect and show-
   the worth of gem and Miner in its glow.


November 13, 2014

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 7/14/2022 8:47:00 PM
Thank you for sharing this hidden gem, I see, penned way back in 2014! Congrats on your win, Sandra!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 7/18/2022 5:12:00 PM
Thank you very much, Seeker, for offering this fine contest, my nice placement, supportive comment, and congrats! Sandra
Date: 12/28/2021 10:26:00 PM
Congrats. Thanks for sharing this "be-attitude of the heart." God bless you. A blessed New Year to your and your family.
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Date: 10/16/2016 1:02:00 PM
another beautiful poem sweet Sandra! congrats on your placement :)-luloo
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Sandra Haight
Date: 10/18/2016 6:52:00 PM
Thank you so much, Laura. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 10/16/2016 7:34:00 AM
Lovely, as always. Congratulations on the win, Sandra! ...Fran
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Sandra Haight
Date: 10/16/2016 10:59:00 AM
Thank you so much, Fran. Sandra
Date: 11/30/2014 2:04:00 AM
You have so many nice winning poems Sandra. :) SKAT
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Date: 11/26/2014 9:53:00 AM
I like your analogy here; very nice, Sandra. Congratulations, well-deserved high marks. Tell me, will Judas be awarded one of the 12 foundation stones for the New Jerusalem? Personally I think it will go to the apostle Paul.
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Date: 11/24/2014 8:42:00 AM
Dropping back with my congratulations on an excellent 3rd place.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 11/24/2014 1:11:00 PM
Brenda, thank you so much for your support! Happy Thanksgiving to you and yours! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 11/23/2014 10:12:00 AM
Sandra, this is a smooth flowing, shifting, solemn sonnet. A prayer that we might all become the cut and polished stones of life.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 11/23/2014 4:16:00 PM
John, thank you so much for stopping by with yor positive comment! I really enjoy working on Sonnets. Sandra
Date: 11/23/2014 2:03:00 AM
beautifully done Sandra congrats on win
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Sandra Haight
Date: 11/23/2014 4:16:00 PM
Hi Shadow, thank you for your nice comment and contrats! Sandra
Date: 11/22/2014 11:34:00 PM
Congrats on ur winning awesome write Sandra! Fantastic work !
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Sandra Haight
Date: 11/23/2014 4:17:00 PM
Thank you so much! I really appreciate your nice comment and congratulations! Sandra
Date: 11/22/2014 5:41:00 PM
OUtstanding! It ends beautifully..A big congrats. BG
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Sandra Haight
Date: 11/23/2014 4:18:00 PM
Hi Barbara, so nice of your to stop by with your positive comment and congratulations! Thank you! Sandra
Date: 11/22/2014 5:29:00 PM
A perfect write, a fav for me. Congratulations on your brilliant win.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 11/23/2014 4:19:00 PM
Thanks, Maurice! I always value your encouranging comments and heartfelt congrats! Sandra
Date: 11/22/2014 4:38:00 PM
Ah men of clay - so true- fired with the essence of God Congrad's on Your Win! Light & LOVE
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Date: 11/22/2014 3:59:00 PM
it's a gem of a poem many congrats:-) hugs jan xx
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Sandra Haight
Date: 11/23/2014 4:21:00 PM
I really appreciate all your support, Jan. Thanks again! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 11/13/2014 9:20:00 PM
this guy anthony is a very fickle judge . If he does not pick this one as a winner, I will know for sure he is crazy.
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Date: 11/13/2014 9:19:00 PM
Sandra, most sonnet writers simply do not understand this art form 100%(in its traditional form). you use meter, rhyme AND message the way they should be done, also great creative thought and enjambment and other poetic devices. It all has to work together. I think you have to be my favorite sonnet writer here to read!! I can always expect perfection, so that is why this is getting a fave from me!!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 11/14/2014 2:32:00 PM
Wow, Andrea, I feel so honored to receive such positive comments from one of the top poet on PS! Sonnets and other Iambic verse forms are my favorite to work with. I began writing when I was very young, so I've had a lot of years to practice!! Thank you so much for your support. Sandra
Date: 11/13/2014 12:02:00 PM
Very interesting Sonnet Sandra. I like how you went from the gems of the earth to the maker of them. Well done. 7
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Sandra Haight
Date: 11/13/2014 3:05:00 PM
Thank you so much, Brenda. Sandra
Date: 11/13/2014 9:49:00 AM
brilliantly penned sonnet Sandra - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Sandra Haight
Date: 11/13/2014 3:05:00 PM
Thank you, Jan. Hugs, Sandra
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