The Geisha - Walk Softly Contest

I smile serenely and sit
waiting as my mentor taught
to please weary gentlemen
massaging egos.





Penned 11 August 2013

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 9/8/2013 9:38:00 PM
Congrats on your win. Morgan
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Seren Roberts
Date: 9/8/2013 11:28:00 PM
Hi Morgan, thank you ...Seren
Date: 9/7/2013 9:08:00 PM
Congrats Seren, in Debbie's awesome contest....... SKAT
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Seren Roberts
Date: 9/8/2013 11:27:00 PM
Thank you Skat ...Seren
Date: 9/7/2013 7:57:00 PM
congrats on your win! Good write :)
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Seren Roberts
Date: 9/8/2013 11:25:00 PM
Hi Sandra, thans for stopping by ...Seren
Date: 9/7/2013 6:45:00 PM
Yes.......for what their softness is trained to do... Nicely done, Seren!!
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Seren Roberts
Date: 9/7/2013 7:18:00 PM
Thank you Carrie. .....Seren
Date: 9/7/2013 6:00:00 PM
Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Seren Roberts
Date: 9/7/2013 6:19:00 PM
Hello Debbie many thanks ...Seren
Date: 9/7/2013 2:45:00 PM
Congrats on your win,great pal.
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Seren Roberts
Date: 9/7/2013 3:27:00 PM
Hello O.A. Thanks for the congrats ...Seren
Date: 9/7/2013 1:47:00 PM
lovely imagery, seren.. super congrats on your stunning win!..:) hugggs
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Seren Roberts
Date: 9/7/2013 3:28:00 PM
Hi Nette. Thanks for your kind comment ...Seren
Date: 9/7/2013 6:59:00 AM
I see we picked the same picture. I enjoyed reading yours. Congratulations.
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Seren Roberts
Date: 9/7/2013 3:29:00 PM
Great minds Richard.... Thanks for stopping by and your comment ....Seren
Date: 9/7/2013 5:41:00 AM
Congrats on the win
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Seren Roberts
Date: 9/7/2013 3:30:00 PM
Thank you Ram for your comment ...Seren...
Date: 9/7/2013 4:53:00 AM
a lovely poem and win..Seren... xox..pd
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Seren Roberts
Date: 9/7/2013 5:19:00 AM
Thanks PD ...Seren
Date: 9/6/2013 11:05:00 PM
I remember yours and how Much I liked it the first time I saw it. It was one of the first ones I saw in this contest and helped inspire me to want to try one too. Congrats, Seren and thanks for your fun birthday wish.
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Date: 9/7/2013 5:19:00 AM
Hi Andrea thanks for the congrats ....Seren
Date: 9/6/2013 7:31:00 PM
Congratulations sass love xx
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Seren Roberts
Date: 9/6/2013 10:41:00 PM
Thank you Mandy...hugs...Seren
Date: 9/6/2013 4:02:00 PM
congrats on your win Seren
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Seren Roberts
Date: 9/6/2013 5:24:00 PM
Thank you Joseph
Date: 9/6/2013 2:58:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your winning work..Congrats..
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Seren Roberts
Date: 9/6/2013 5:23:00 PM
thank you Sarah
Date: 8/17/2013 11:43:00 PM
Very nice, my ego is a wee bit sore! :)
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Date: 8/14/2013 7:18:00 AM
This is super good, Seren!!! One of the best I've seen in this contest. Just say egos. It doesn't need the apostrophe. I hope Debs loves it!
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Date: 8/11/2013 10:46:00 PM
This is a spellbinding write crafted by your illustrious pen! I really enjoyed reading this perfect poem this evening! You will do wonderfully in the contest, Great Work!!
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Seren Roberts
Date: 8/11/2013 10:51:00 PM
I wish Russell, so many better poets in the room....Seren
Date: 8/11/2013 1:10:00 PM
Yes I agree with Nette the "massaging ego's" is a wonderful ending to the poem.
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Date: 8/11/2013 10:21:00 AM
you wordplay brings me to another place and time, seren... you just amaze; i like the ego bit..:) huggs
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Seren Roberts
Date: 8/11/2013 1:09:00 PM
thank you Nette , I have my moments of inspiration lol...Seren
Date: 8/11/2013 7:45:00 AM
very good write Seren.....best wishes...thanks for stopping by..
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Seren Roberts
Date: 8/11/2013 9:03:00 AM
Thank you Joseph....Seren
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