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The Gardenia

Her shimmering lavender gown of satin and lace Made her look like a fairy princess dressed for the dance. The lad held a delicate, creamy-white gardenia On her shoulder next to her radiant, beaming face. She had requested an orchid; she thought it so chic, The sweet fragrance of the gardenia altered her choice She admired herself in the grand vestibule mirror, And gave her timid boyfriend a sweet peck on the cheek. When the evening ended, she carefully put the bloom Pressing between pages of her senior annual, A reminder of that night for the rest of her life She gave it a special place on a shelf in her room. As the years crept slowly by, and events shaped her life Like the pressed gardenia she had carefully hidden, Her memory of the lad from long ago faded She mothered her seven children, another man's wife. One day her husband given a promotion senior, Came home early to take his good wife out to dinner She descended their staircase dressed in satin and lace He pinned a sweet-smelling gardenia next to her face.

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Date: 3/13/2021 4:05:00 AM
cute story, i like gardenias :) i'm never sure exactly what imagism is either - presumably a poem with strong images lol i've answered your questioning on my poem by the way.:)
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 3/13/2021 9:01:00 AM
Thanks, Charlotte. I'll go back and see what you said. Your comments are so appreciated.
Date: 3/11/2021 11:06:00 PM
Beautiful story, made me want to weep. If I was a weeper I would be boo-hooing all over the floor here, because it is almost TOO much beauty for my mind. I don't "do" imagery, but I severely appreciate it when it has been done well!
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 3/12/2021 9:58:00 AM
Ah, thanks, Caren. I'm never sure what "imagism" is in terms of style and form. I know it is difficult to write, so I tried three times and finally decided to submit the one about Mother and her dahlias. The Gardenia one might have been better, though. Who knows?
Date: 3/11/2021 4:47:00 PM
Hello Milton … its amazing how little things from long ago revive a memory. When our gardenia flowered, the perfume was so alluring - thank you Milton - Lindsay
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 3/11/2021 5:14:00 PM
Thank you, Lindsay. I'm glad you stopped by and read my poem. I appreciate you.
Date: 3/11/2021 11:54:00 AM
What a sweet, and slightly pensive, verse LM. Lovely in its memories with a ironically charming ending. Enjoyed.
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 3/11/2021 3:44:00 PM
Thanks so much, Sam. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Date: 3/11/2021 11:19:00 AM
Remembrance of things passed. A very dear memory brought back by sight and a sweet smell; even though it was only her memory. A beautiful poem. Makes me think of my nom de plume, Marcela Proust"; the famous scene in which Swann smells the madeleine cookies and is transported back to his childhood, and memories of his mother. BUT, the question for YOUR poem is why the HUSBAND chose a gardenia? HE was not HER teenage love. Hmm? Thank you for making me think hahaha.
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 3/11/2021 3:44:00 PM
Sometimes the sentiment indicates the flower, don't you think? Possibly? Did her husband see in her the same gentle naivete and femininity her boyfriend saw long ago? Had she, perhaps, inadvertently or passingly mentioned her love for the gardenia without talking about the situation long ago? I don't know. I just wrote the poem! lol

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