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The Garden

The garden so beautiful in itself, Was surely one that never looked the worse. Most beautiful in the world, But it held an evil curse. The story was long ago, Bewitched by all to tell. But in a dark and lonely night, Is when the madness fell. I was just a young lad, Not near the age of nine. But as if it were yesterday, I remember it clear in my mind. I had sat at my mother’s feet, Anxiously waiting for the tale. She warned me not to repeat it, For it would end with one turning pale. She started in a low and tranquilizing voice, Not wanting to be discovered. She leaned toward me, And the tale she began to uncover. “The garden is beautiful, But most dangerous to any schmuck. As to walk among the flowers, Would be of your own bad luck. There was a man once, Who walked so calmly through. But unfortunately for him, He knew not of the evil that grew. If only he would have learned, Maybe his life would be saved. But lonely in the garden, He had not a chance to live another day. As his foot hit the garden, He heard an evil hiss. He looked around seeing no one near, But having a feeling of holy bliss. The hissing continued as he stopped to look, But he could not blench from the garden. He could not feel it creeping around his legs, Crawling up as he stood harden. His heart started thumping, Rapidly getting faster. He was then aware of the evil around him, But he had no control, as if he were not the master. He could feel it squeezing, His breath getting stanch. He could feel his soul being quaffed away, But he would not have a chance. It was the pain of a knife, Being shoved through his chest. But as the pain grew more, So did the feeling of complete rest. The feeling was hard to explain, He felt as if he would die. As if the cool-ness covered the pain, But loving the feeling of the intense high. As he sank into the garden, He whispered the warning. It carried in the wind, And onto the morning.” My mother fell back in her chair, Looking as though she was broken. She did not say another word, For fear of the warning spoken. It was on that dreadful day, When the tale had been told again. It was soon to end a life, As if to say Amen. So now as I walk this lonely road, Not knowing where my feet have lead. I glance ahead just once, And am doomed to bear the dread. I could not help the pull I felt, I could not break away. For I have heard the tale, So this became my day. I walk into the garden, Feeling the pain all around. This is the end of my tale, For the curse I have just found.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 6/14/2016 7:04:00 PM
shannon hahn, nicely penned. Enjoyed reading your thoughts and words today. **SKAT**
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Date: 3/19/2016 12:30:00 AM
Shannon Hahn, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 3/17/2016 10:48:00 PM
Shannon, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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