The Game of Life

My son looked through the board games
And he chose the Game of Life,
Where people-pegs must navigate 
Through times of joy and strife.

My grandkids bought insurance,
Found a spouse and had some kids,
Took a job and earned enough to
Be quite rich or on the skids.

It was fun to watch their styles,
Taking risks or laying low
And they loved to sue each other,
Though the tears would sometimes flow.

Yet the 9 year old did question 
Why the winner at the end
Was the one who had the biggest
Pile of money he could spend.

He insisted that in life
Mere money shouldn’t be the judge
Of what really is important 
As through ups and downs we trudge.

I was thrilled at that conclusion
But I laughed when, in a flash,
He declared himself the winner
After counting out his cash.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Rigoler Avatar
January 4, 2023 at 2:32 PM
Love the ending, Ilene. Wonderful rhythm to these lines too. / Maurice
Krutsinger Avatar
January 4, 2023 at 1:07 AM
The ending is perfect!
Daniel Avatar
January 1, 2023 at 4:26 AM
Wonderful poem, Ilene, kids teach us so much in their innocence:) imagine a world with only children, how peaceful it would be!
Kyser Avatar
December 31, 2022 at 2:22 PM
Ha, good on Ilene - kids are pretty quick on the uptake... :-)
Slaughter Avatar
December 31, 2022 at 1:54 PM
Well, Ilene, a little "do-re-mi" as a backup plan was never a bad idea. A delightful read, and it appears that you raised your kids right.
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