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The Further Adventures of Mr. Laurel and Mr. Hardy.

Stanleys' plane circles wild, fro and aft. Ollie screamed up: " Throw me a raft!" Oh Ho Oh Ho Oh Ho Oh Ho. with gathering gators I won't be here later One just gave my drawers a big draft. OhhhOhhh.... When they opened the gator to see which intestine poor Ollie might be. He plops out pratfall then looks at us all and smiles: " hm hm hm, I'm still me." Stanley: " But I thought.. I thought you were eaten..oo whooo whoo whoo..." Oliver looks at us, shrugs and throws his arms up. ( Cue music.) Coo Coo Coo Coo, Coo Coo THE END. This is inspired by Miss Carrie Richards, one of the best. This Is Another Fine Mess You've Gotten ME Into, Stanley...

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Date: 8/16/2010 8:41:00 PM
VEry clever and congrats again, Gerard! LUv, Andrea
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Date: 8/16/2010 5:53:00 AM
Congratulations to you Gerard on your win in John Freeman and Carolyn Devonshire's shared contest "Double Limerick Inspiration". Love, Carol
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Date: 8/15/2010 10:05:00 PM
Copngratulations on your win, Gerard. Love, Joyce
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Date: 8/15/2010 7:08:00 PM
Congrats for your well deserved win. Alll the best, Iolanda
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Date: 8/15/2010 6:06:00 PM
Congrats on your well deserved win, Gerard
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Date: 8/15/2010 4:24:00 PM
Gerard, John and I were far apart in our rankings. I would have given this one top honors. Awesome! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 8/15/2010 3:02:00 PM
Ha ha....this fine mess got you smack into the middle of the winner's circle!! Congratulations on taking my limerick, and making it sooo much better!! Well done, Gerard!! :) Great work!! Love, Carrie
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Date: 8/15/2010 2:47:00 PM
Congrats Gerard on your winning poem in the Double Limerick contest with this great piece my friend.. enjoy another momentous victory this happy Sunday..luv.. am in Italy.. ciao.. yeah..luv..
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Date: 8/15/2010 2:38:00 PM
Thanks Gerard for the special effort and congratulations on your place, Agape, Moses
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Date: 8/9/2010 11:16:00 AM
I was gone and did not read any poetry the past weekend. So I am trying to get some read today. I am pleased that yours is among what I have read today and I have enjoyed reading it. I hope you have a wonderful week filled with inspiration Gerard. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/9/2010 8:15:00 AM
LOVED IT!!! I was laughing like I used to laugh as a kid watching these bumbling fellows!! It is just like them....Stanley looking up with his goofy smile, and Ollie throwing up his arms!! You've got them down to perfection, Gerard!!! Great job. I"m tickled you took my silly little poem, and ran with it... it was an honor!! :) ~ Carrie
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Date: 8/9/2010 7:06:00 AM
I simply the humorous side of the poem, Gerard.
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Date: 8/8/2010 8:42:00 PM
Well done Gerard, taking a poem and flipping it... love the humor. Enjoyed your little twist,..p.d.
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Date: 8/8/2010 2:07:00 PM
You picked a good poem to emulate, Gerard! I loved Carrie's original and yours takes the humor even further! Another fine mess, indeed! Best wishes, Carolyn
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