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Many weeping people have come to my funeral with flowers, Oh the red roses are so beautiful and the lilies divine; My dress is of the softest rosy pink and it is all chiffon and wispy, All my visitors are talking in low hushed voices. They say I look beautiful and I want to smile but cannot, It seems that my pink lips and my mouth are sewn shut; My hands are folded upon my chest and I am holding a rosary, Odd, I do not recall owning white pearl rosary beads. Then they all leave and I am alone in this dark cold room, Well, I might as well get some sleep in this dream; So I try to close my eyes and realize they are already closed, I hate this dream and I struggle to leave it behind. The next morning the visitors are back with sad smiles, They kiss my cheek and their tears are falling on me; I am being carried away in this boxy thing with the lid closed. But I can still hear everything, the prayers and songs. Oh dear Lord, I want to wake up now, I am so afraid, I feel movement of wheels beneath me, the turning; And I sense the tranquility of the cemetery and green grass, And then they are closing the door of the family crypt. I am screaming, I am still breathing, don't leave me here. Or am I? I'm not sure anymore if this is a dream . . . . . ________________________ September 17, 2015 Verse For the contest, Dark and Twisted, sponsor, Nathan A. 6th Place

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Date: 10/15/2015 9:38:00 PM
Hello Broken, Nice to see you on Nate's winning list. Congrats... Love SKAT
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Date: 10/14/2015 7:52:00 PM
THAT WAS GREAT! Congrats on your win and I have actually had a dream about that once.
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Date: 10/14/2015 5:33:00 PM
very chilling imagery congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 10/13/2015 11:44:00 PM
Wonderful take on the theme broken with this superb winning write! Big congrats!
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Date: 10/13/2015 11:01:00 PM
This is my favorite dark poem. Others are great, too, but this gives chills. Congratulations
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Date: 10/13/2015 10:26:00 PM
Back to congratulate you on your wonderful win, Broken Wings! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 10/13/2015 10:15:00 PM
way to go, Constance!! Congrats in the creepy contest!
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Date: 10/13/2015 9:43:00 PM
Broken, ' thank you. nate
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Date: 9/20/2015 7:25:00 PM
Oh my, Broken...you have met the challenge so well for this contest...dark and twisted for sure. An amazing write... and all the best for the contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 9/18/2015 6:41:00 PM
Great idea Broken Wing. Nicely done.
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Date: 9/17/2015 9:11:00 PM
Scary, thought. Many people have this fear. Well done BW.
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