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I Love You

You are the fuel of my lantern
The Moon of my sea
The reef of my ocean
The trout of my stream

You are the oasis of my desert 
The sole star of my sky
The jewell of my shirt
The pearl of my shell

You__ the trout of my stream
The chocolate of my cake
The mitochondria of my cell
The fruit of my shake

Only if you knew the affinity that I hold for you
Forever we will moor on heaven's shores for sure

~17-10-21
(For I love you poetry contest by Eve)

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Shane Thacker Date: 2/11/2024 11:13:00 AM I hope to be loved this much some day. Nicely written, Paghunda! Login to Reply Paghunda Zahid Date: 8/2/2025 11:39:00 AM May you find love and peace in life. Ameen

Deb M Date: 12/28/2021 9:10:00 PM Beautiful! Debx Login to Reply Paghunda Zahid Date: 8/2/2025 11:39:00 AM Thanks

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 12/21/2021 6:45:00 AM - A wonderful writing ... - I wish you a lovely Christmas and a blessed New Year, Paghunda :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Paghunda Zahid Date: 8/2/2025 11:39:00 AM Thanks Anne

Lisa Ricci Date: 12/6/2021 9:01:00 AM Hello Paghunda - Your entry is lovely and it amazes me how entries of love never get old or redundant. I very much enjoyed your intake and entry. May this day find you well. Thank you for sharing. Enjoy poetry and poetrysoup. Login to Reply Paghunda Zahid Date: 3/22/2024 9:01:00 AM Thanks Lisa

Eric Cohen Date: 11/28/2021 8:54:00 PM Moving and original conception. Wonderful poetry, Paghunda. Login to Reply

Paul Callus Date: 11/23/2021 10:50:00 AM I love it, Paghunda! Somebody is very lucky to have such a lovely romantic dedication! ~ Regards // paul Login to Reply

Regina Mcintosh Date: 11/19/2021 3:07:00 AM Lovely poem. I enjoyed. God bless you. Love, Gina Login to Reply Paghunda Zahid Date: 11/20/2021 9:38:00 AM Ameen. Thank you

Kim Rodrigues Date: 11/7/2021 6:30:00 PM Some terrific writing! Login to Reply Paghunda Zahid Date: 11/8/2021 9:48:00 AM :)

Susan Lawrence Date: 11/6/2021 7:16:00 AM Just beautiful Paghunda …. Deep and kind and poignant with messages from the heart . Belated congratulations on your win . Thank you for your comment on my poem . Blessings, Susan :) Login to Reply Paghunda Zahid Date: 11/6/2021 7:49:00 AM Thanks Lawrence

Susan Ashley Date: 11/2/2021 8:55:00 PM Dear Paghunda, you bare you heart and soul so beautifully. Amazing imagery graces the depth of your expressive poem. Congratulations for your excellent win, my friend. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan Login to Reply Paghunda Zahid Date: 11/6/2021 7:47:00 AM Thank you Susan. Really kind of you

Jennifer Proxenos Date: 11/2/2021 12:14:00 AM You describe the essence of our poetic addiction Kudos my lovely friend, for it means all the above to me also. I see you won and so rightly so. Congratulations.dear Paghunda. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer Login to Reply Paghunda Zahid Date: 11/2/2021 5:43:00 AM Hey Jenn, thank you for stopping by.. Stay blessed

Shirley Candy Date: 10/26/2021 11:21:00 PM Oh I adore this one. Login to Reply Paghunda Zahid Date: 11/2/2021 5:43:00 AM Thanks Shirley

Constance La France Date: 10/25/2021 8:35:00 AM Paghunda, lovely poem and congratulations on your win in Eve's contest ~ friendship and poetry _Constance Login to Reply Paghunda Zahid Date: 10/25/2021 9:06:00 AM Thank you :-)

Christuraj Alex Date: 10/25/2021 12:03:00 AM Great comparisons of the lover.Poetically genuine! Congratulations! Login to Reply Paghunda Zahid Date: 10/25/2021 9:29:00 AM Thanks Alex

Eve Roper Date: 10/24/2021 6:47:00 PM Congratulations on your win, Pagunda. Thank you for entering it in the contest. Hugs Eve Login to Reply Paghunda Zahid Date: 10/25/2021 9:03:00 AM Thank you Eve. I appreciate it :-)

Karen Jones Date: 10/17/2021 5:31:00 PM What a romantic write. I enjoyed your poem. Login to Reply Paghunda Zahid Date: 10/25/2021 9:03:00 AM Thanks